Love

Love

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ a little romantic scribble ~

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                                   art ~ Charmaine Olivia



 Love…

 

To lay my head a moment ‘pon his chest

a serenade of two hearts intertwined

that takes us far above the restless night

where only heaven waits, we move as one

I’ll count the stars reflection in his eyes

and  know each wish was only that for love

 

Each breath between us sweet

oh precious one…

                                hold me close as midnight sheds her dew      

 

To wake to pale white lilies standing tall

and buds upon the vine glistening dawn

to catch each falling tear, this pearly morn

as soft as silk yet warm, as he is near

then join him half-awake veiled in our dream

where wishes still shine true in loving eyes…


© 2016 MsJewel



Author's Note

MsJewel
art ~ Charmaine Olivia
poetry ~ MsJewel

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Julie,
I don't know where to begin. If I say this is the most beautiful poem of love between a man and a woman, I would not be exagerating.
You have a gift young lady. Your writing inspires a bountiful garden of full flowers with soft colors and petals. I truly am in awe of your writing.
Peace,
Richie b.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your kindness and for supporting my poetry. I'm thrilled you enjoy it. :) Julie



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A truly beautifully written poem. I very much enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing! :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Love this beautiful write!!,. . Your poetry is always on point. Thanks for sharing this wonderful write

Poeticme

Posted 1 Year Ago


Julie,
I don't know where to begin. If I say this is the most beautiful poem of love between a man and a woman, I would not be exagerating.
You have a gift young lady. Your writing inspires a bountiful garden of full flowers with soft colors and petals. I truly am in awe of your writing.
Peace,
Richie b.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your kindness and for supporting my poetry. I'm thrilled you enjoy it. :) Julie
very gentle words. A hearts cure.
look at these lines..very soothing

Each breath between us sweet
oh precious one…
hold me close as midnight sheds her dew

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Year Ago

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. :) Julie
this is beautiful I love this poem it makes me still
believe that true love is still waiting

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Year Ago

I hope it's out there waiting for you :) Julie
A soft velvet writing which is cherished by readers. Thanks for inviting.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you :) Julie
White lillies stand tall and bud------stop it.
This is great but you have to write about the normal ones.


Posted 1 Year Ago


Your words flow like music, soft and rhythmic, calling the soul to this place of perfect bliss. All nature seems to come to life to awaken this gorgeous dream.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
Nothing is mysterious, no human relation. Except love. Susan Sontag.
This is full of that mystery.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you Ken :) Julie
a nice romantic poem to wake up to this morning...

you surely do write from the heart...

j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you Jacob :) Julie

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