Love

~ a little romantic scribble ~

                                   art ~ Charmaine Olivia

 Love…

 

To lay my head a moment ‘pon his chest

a serenade of two hearts intertwined

that takes us far above the restless night

where only heaven waits, we move as one

I’ll count the stars reflection in his eyes

and  know each wish was only that for love

 

Each breath between us sweet

oh precious one…

                                hold me close as midnight sheds her dew      

 

To wake to pale white lilies standing tall

and buds upon the vine glistening dawn

to catch each falling tear, this pearly morn

as soft as silk yet warm, as he is near

then join him half-awake veiled in our dream

where wishes still shine true in loving eyes…

Author's Note

art ~ Charmaine Olivia
poetry ~ MsJewel

Reviews

[richieb]

Julie,
I don't know where to begin. If I say this is the most beautiful poem of love between a man and a woman, I would not be exagerating.
You have a gift young lady. Your writing inspires a bountiful garden of full flowers with soft colors and petals. I truly am in awe of your writing.
Peace,
Richie b.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kindness and for supporting my poetry. I'm thrilled you enjoy it. :) Julie

[Sudeep Mishra]

Masterpiece.
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Thank you for writing such grace.

[cycy]

Haven't had a lot of time for writing because of school, definitely one of the writers I've missed this whole time. this piece just reminded me why. so full of grace and beauty and everything perfect and sweet. you make me think of butterflies and rainbows dear, best feeling ever lolx. keep on keeping on. xx :)

[adreamer]

A beautiful poem that come from your heart and soul Julie take care my friend you are in my thoughts all the time it come from the other me. :) Larry

[Davidgeo]

Half awake would be a substantial improvement.

You should grace this place more with your presence. Jerk face.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Julie, your poem has captured romance...
like a pearl encased in an ocean of love and
passion to be discovered in a dream... truly, Pat

[Ana B.]

And i can only sigh reading this....sheer beauty, a true jewel, dear author :)

[SmittyJas]

Lovely poetry of love and kindness of the heart.

[Trace]

Very beautiful sentiments. Nobody writes sensual emotions and love lyrics like you.
being in love is the most wonderful feeling and the only way to to truly understand the
emotion you write about.

So nice to read you.

Huggs. Trace

[Angad Waraich]

Sigh! You have me floored every time i read your poetry, its just so warm and full of life. You are amongst my absolute favorite writers. Not much else to say. Its been a while since i have been able to write anything worthwhile but i do sign onto this website to read your work from time to time. Always leaves me with a smile.

Keep writing !!

Great work.
Angad

[MsJewel]

Thank you for the lovely compliment Angad. It is wonderful to see you. :) Julie