White Linen

White Linen

A Poem by MsJewel

"At the heart of love lies the quickening of senses, the thrill of touch, the perfume of passion, the taste and the voice of love, the vision of the beloved…"Kathleen Blease

 

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art ~ Vidan ~ The Unveiling

 

In white linen

we linger…

 

his hands finding the softest curves

my breath caught

in the folds of his linen sheets

where I forget fear,

                                      and all the weary things fade

in the light and living of his touch

flooding my soul

                     as I sigh and swoon

and all the night silences to hear

the sweetest passage of a song

                     yes,

the music set about his honey tongue

serenading me ‘til passion melts in bliss

and dawn sweeps the morning sky

                                in pink

                                           … and white linen


© 2017 MsJewel



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this is so beautiful. it oozes love & passion through your elegant words which dance off the page. you are ever the romantic, painting deep portraits that take us away to another dimension where time stands still. this makes you just sigh in amore and is beyond deep. holding us in a delicate loving embrace. what's not to like?

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Months Ago

You are very kind Pete. Thank you :) Julie



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In white linen we linger. I love this short piece of poetry. thanks for sharing.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Such a sensuous write. Weaving of the words are mesmerizing !
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Posted 1 Month Ago


Structure: Nice.
Colors: Nice again.
Flow: Awesome.
Feel: To the par.



Posted 6 Months Ago


I'm noticing that you've used the "s" sound quite a bit thru-out, which gives the read a silky sound & also enjoying your alliteration: "flooding my soul as I sigh and swoon" . . . This is nicely sensual & graceful.

Posted 7 Months Ago


I love how you painted the after-glow sky in the colours of the feelings of the lovers.
Pure sensual writing of the highest calibre Julie.
:)


Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

8 Months Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment Tony :) Julie
I like it, the total sense of surrender and passion

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

8 Months Ago

Thank you James :) Julie
The painting is lovely for the eyes and the poetry lovely for the tongue..I enjoyed the wording very much.. write on..

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Months Ago

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment :) Julie
Your imagery touches on all the senses here, Julie. Seductive, passionate, enticing. A melodic poetic rendering....so beautiful. Lydi**

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Months Ago

Thank you lovely Lydi! :) Julie
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This was soft and visually laid out. I love how you captured how the solace of the bed can be such a safe and far away place.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
when i see you have posted i am already taking a deep sigh ... a breath of contentment ... your pics are always demure and sensuous ..and excite me little heart .. then i read the softest of love poems ..deeper than the sexual connection but equal in importance ... i am drawn in and say to meself ... "remember to be that man" ;) another jewel from the pen of Ms. Jewel
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Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Months Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

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MsJewel
MsJewel

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I've been writing poetry for 15 years. My poetry isn't unique in any way, but it is written from the heart. I have trouble keeping up with everyone's poetry, so please send me rr's. I enjoy rec.. more..

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