White Linen

"At the heart of love lies the quickening of senses, the thrill of touch, the perfume of passion, the taste and the voice of love, the vision of the beloved…"Kathleen Blease

 

art ~ Vidan ~ The Unveiling

 

In white linen

we linger…

 

his hands finding the softest curves

my breath caught

in the folds of his linen sheets

where I forget fear,

                                      and all the weary things fade

in the light and living of his touch

flooding my soul

                     as I sigh and swoon

and all the night silences to hear

the sweetest passage of a song

                     yes,

the music set about his honey tongue

serenading me ‘til passion melts in bliss

and dawn sweeps the morning sky

                                in pink

                                           … and white linen

Reviews

[Pete]

this is so beautiful. it oozes love & passion through your elegant words which dance off the page. you are ever the romantic, painting deep portraits that take us away to another dimension where time stands still. this makes you just sigh in amore and is beyond deep. holding us in a delicate loving embrace. what's not to like?

[MsJewel]

You are very kind Pete. Thank you :) Julie

[Einstein Noodle]

when i see you have posted i am already taking a deep sigh ... a breath of contentment ... your pics are always demure and sensuous ..and excite me little heart .. then i read the softest of love poems ..deeper than the sexual connection but equal in importance ... i am drawn in and say to meself ... "remember to be that man" ;) another jewel from the pen of Ms. Jewel
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[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

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A very sensual piece; very delicately written and very passionate.

Between those white linen sheets all Earthly troubles give way to love, passion and deepest desires.

A very lovely write. Soft, soothing and infinitely romantic.

[MsJewel]

You are very kind. Thanks so much :) Julie

[Tabby Mac]

This is a passionate piece Julie! Well done! So sexy and romantic! Love this one!
Tabby

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much Tabby :) Julie

[WILDERNESS]

Exhaled only after reading the complete poem ........ You have mastered this theme........... lovely

[MsJewel]

Thank you my dear friend :) Julie

[WILDERNESS]

Pleasure My dear ......

[redzone]

I think your poem, its sensuality and passion bring alive the opening quote... big *sigh* and smile from me Julie...

redzone

[MsJewel]

I'm glad my simple words made you smile. Thanks Curt. I'm smiling too. :) Julie

[onceloved]

Beautiful Julie, your words go far beyond what they seem to be showing your deep feeling in them that come from your heart and soul. He is the wind beneath wing always will be :) Larry

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[mercy party]

Written so well with total class and tenderness.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[emmajoy]

Your leading picture warns, invites, lures, the reader into the most beautiful moments . I feel like an intruder, a voyeuse.. and really need to creep away but admitting willingly, that poem touches all the senses in a very special way. Beautiful layout.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words Emmajoy :) Julie

[Nicholas Shea]

This is so beautiful! I have written a villanelle titled "The Unveiling" haha I enjoyed this read.. Romantic and delicate, but still has that fire!

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it Nicholas. I'll go check out your Unveiling. :) Julie

[Sami Khalil]

A poem to sigh and swoon about. Soft as white linen, sweet as honey and passionate like the presentation. Marvelous...:)...............

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend. :) Julie

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome sweetly. .....::::))))