Soft Unrest

Dark of night in amethyst

dreams, they lie in soft unrest

starlight rises from the sea

moonlight crowned in such beauty…

           

 

From the aching depths below

I feel the lingering glow

of the night,

                                      the sky,

                                                          the sea

the dreams that wait for you, for me

 

So warm in the paling moon

oh would it be far too soon

to wish you near, let you in

feel the curve of silken skin

 

I will don my velvet dress

hold you to my beating breast

loosening my golden hair

glistening on perfumed air

 

With careless head, heaven bound

feet swept gently from the ground

in your arms of tenderness

embraced with love’s sweetest breath

 

Slip into me and be lost

‘til time fades and we exhaust

the light of the moon’s bright crown

in my sea of love to drown….

 

Dark of night, in amethyst

                                                         dreams they lie in soft unrest

Author's Note

art ~ Ron Discenza
poetry ~ MsJewel

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

oh my my! whew! sooooooooooo romantic and hot! i am almost blushing as it seems too private a moment to be peeking in on ..and as always makes me want to be "him" ;) what a splendid dish .. the sway, the moon the waves .. makes me dream
E.
ps smart use of contrast with the "unrest" ..i wasn't expecting resolution :O

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thanks so much :) Julie

[Pete]

so sensual and alluring. has a seductive sophistication to it. the embodiment of elegance. your writing whispers romance. very classy and graceful. your words have a lilt to them. now i have to go take a walk outside in the cold!

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment and compliment. I appreciate it very much Pete :) Julie

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Julie... the softness of the sea at night when dreams caress the moonlight... and memories bring
feelings of restless slumber when
Love was near. Beautiful poetry. truly, Pat

[MsJewel]

Thank you my dear friend :) Julie

[zaisham9393]

Sweet,romantic and beautiful!
Thank you for sharing Julie :)!

[MsJewel]

Thank you for the lovely comment :) Julie

[Dr. YumnaKay]

"So warm in the paling moon
oh would it be far too soon
to wish you near, let you in
feel the curve of silken skin"

Wow! This was erotic and yet held an elegance in its words! I liked the soft sensuality in this piece. Superb :)

[MsJewel]

You are very kind. Thank you :) Julie

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome! A pleasure always 😊

[John Alexander McFadyen]

So beautifully sensual and in silky verse that feels both romantic and yet very..............erotic!

[MsJewel]

Thanks for your kind words John :) Julie

[Poeticme]

This is so beautiful my lady, such passion and very erotic write, loved it!!, The further​ I got into it, the faster my heart was besting, so poetic.... Thanks you for sharing this wonderful piece

Poeticme

[MsJewel]

A little naughty - a little nice - it's how I roll....Thrilled you enjoyed it. :) Julie

[Poeticme]

You bet sweetie

[onceloved]

I have always admire the ways you can express the soft sensual side of you in your writing the last paragraph was express so beautifully. :) Larry

[MsJewel]

Thank you Larry :) Julie