Slow and Deep

Slow and Deep

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ a love poem ~

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Time stands in wonder

as the window of my soul opens to greet you

as one would the dawn…

 

a silent embrace of beauty blissfully captured

 

Your words fall upon me like petals from a wildflower

once dancing gracefully in a carefree breeze

now mine

not to hold

but to savor slowly

as if it were a sip of fine wine

or a kiss

lingering

like a breath held in a moonlit dream

 

My spirit smiles slow and deep

 


© 2017 MsJewel



Author's Note

MsJewel
Art ~ Ana Razumovskaya
Poetry ~ MsJewel

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I love the images I get when I think all the words through. I read this piece over and over. It reminds me of love at first sight. Talking with someone we meet but secretly knowing they are a soul mate.
I love the word choice very delicate and descriptive!
'Your words fall upon me like petals from a wildflower...'
Beautiful imagery here! Amazing!
Well penned!
Tabby

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MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your kind words Tabby :) Julie



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Love your creative use of letter placement! Most things are best slow and deep!

Posted 6 Months Ago


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MsJewel

6 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
My spirit smiles slow n deep now i love this part. thanks

Posted 1 Year Ago


Dear Jewel!

Did I find you in waters deep smiling in grace that paints your face. As always my soul tickles among your worded breath.

Regards,
Al

Posted 1 Year Ago


My spirit smiles slow and deep

As I smiling slowly and deeply. This feels like a shower of petals.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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MsJewel

1 Year Ago

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it.. Thanks so much :) Julie
sublime piece of writing. says it all with nothing else needed.

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MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your lovely review :) Julie
Tender, gentle romance. So very beautiful. Razumovskaya's artwork is the perfect complement to your words. Lydi**

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MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you Lydi :) Julie
Splendidly done, superimposed elegance ...

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MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
Dream Weaver

1 Year Ago

You're quite welcome Julie.
You write so beautifully....enjoyed :) x

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MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your kind words. :) Julie
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I love how you expressed such feeling about words being spoken. Sometimes it is just a natural high in itself to hear a certain someone speak .... it can intoxicate you more than touch at times.

You expressed it beautifully as always.

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MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate it very much :) Julie
So nicely written. The beginning alone is an ear catcher. :)

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MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

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MsJewel

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