Slow and Deep

Slow and Deep

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ a love poem ~

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Time stands in wonder

as the window of my soul opens to greet you

as one would the dawn…

 

a silent embrace of beauty blissfully captured

 

Your words fall upon me like petals from a wildflower

once dancing gracefully in a carefree breeze

now mine

not to hold

but to savor slowly

as if it were a sip of fine wine

or a kiss

lingering

like a breath held in a moonlit dream

 

My spirit smiles slow and deep

 


© 2017 MsJewel



Author's Note

MsJewel
Art ~ Ana Razumovskaya
Poetry ~ MsJewel

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I love the images I get when I think all the words through. I read this piece over and over. It reminds me of love at first sight. Talking with someone we meet but secretly knowing they are a soul mate.
I love the word choice very delicate and descriptive!
'Your words fall upon me like petals from a wildflower...'
Beautiful imagery here! Amazing!
Well penned!
Tabby

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your kind words Tabby :) Julie


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Love your creative use of letter placement! Most things are best slow and deep!

Posted 3 Months Ago


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MsJewel

3 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
My spirit smiles slow n deep now i love this part. thanks

Posted 9 Months Ago


Dear Jewel!

Did I find you in waters deep smiling in grace that paints your face. As always my soul tickles among your worded breath.

Regards,
Al

Posted 10 Months Ago


My spirit smiles slow and deep

As I smiling slowly and deeply. This feels like a shower of petals.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Year Ago

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it.. Thanks so much :) Julie
sublime piece of writing. says it all with nothing else needed.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your lovely review :) Julie
Tender, gentle romance. So very beautiful. Razumovskaya's artwork is the perfect complement to your words. Lydi**

Posted 1 Year Ago


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MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you Lydi :) Julie
Splendidly done, superimposed elegance ...

Posted 1 Year Ago


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MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
Dream Weaver

1 Year Ago

You're quite welcome Julie.
You write so beautifully....enjoyed :) x

Posted 1 Year Ago


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MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your kind words. :) Julie
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I love how you expressed such feeling about words being spoken. Sometimes it is just a natural high in itself to hear a certain someone speak .... it can intoxicate you more than touch at times.

You expressed it beautifully as always.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate it very much :) Julie
So nicely written. The beginning alone is an ear catcher. :)

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MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

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MsJewel

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