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The Last Love Poem

The Last Love Poem

A Poem by MsJewel
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"If this were the last love poem...."

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                                                         art compliments of pinterest

   

 The Last Love Poem

 

If this were the last love poem ever written

it would be for you, my love

and the rain…

 

falling softly on the roses

 

I fell too

for your eyes,

 pools of liquid moonlight

and your kisses,

whispering of rainbows forevermore

 

Yes, if this were the last love poem ever written

it would be for you…

 

and the rain


© 2017 MsJewel



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I really enjoy this poem, I love the hyperbole of the last love poem, I love the importance it gives itself to say that the object of the speakers affection would be it, the absolute last. You have a lovely way with words, and I like your word placement. Well done!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

6 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie



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this reminds me of an arabic poem, and its very nice. i loved the truth of love behind the words.
this is very well done :D

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Year Ago

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. :) Julie
Beautiful! A tribute to a love once been and the rain that watched it go. Love, like flowers, blossoms and fades. The rain gives life and washes clean. It hides and washes away the tears.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your kind words Linda. :) Julie
it seems that love,rain and roses seem to fit each other,beautiful thoughts of love

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you :) Julie
Each time I step into your poetic world you gift me with words of silk. Fluid, whispy and romantic.

Always a pleasure Julie. :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Year Ago

You are very sweet. Thank you. :) Julie
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If it were then a fine one to leave with Miss J...

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you :) Julie
water adds that erotic element, steamy when on naked skin, a fine write Julie but not your last love poem!

Posted 1 Year Ago


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MsJewel

1 Year Ago

No...I can't imagine the last. Thank you Andrew :) Julie
Lovely and eloquent. Love and rain just seem to enhance each other. "Whispering of rainbows forevermore"-beautiful imagery. Loved this!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I appreciate it very much :) Julie
beautiful, I loved the way you displayed it visually

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you :) Julie
i like this...reminds me of the Lovin'
Spoonful..."you and me and rain on the roof, caught up in a summer shower, drying while it soaks the flowers"

a tribute to both...isn't it interesting...most people complain about the rain, and yet...there seems to be more romance during showers.
nicely laid out on the page, Julie
j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thanks so much Jacob :) Julie
A romantic and sensual gem. Loved the picture you've displayed with your poem as well. Great work, a loving masterpiece. :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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