The Last Love Poem

The Last Love Poem

A Poem by MsJewel
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"If this were the last love poem...."

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 The Last Love Poem

 

If this were the last love poem ever written

it would be for you, my love

and the rain…

 

falling softly on the roses

 

I fell too

for your eyes,

 pools of liquid moonlight

and your kisses,

whispering of rainbows forevermore

 

Yes, if this were the last love poem ever written

it would be for you…

 

and the rain


© 2017 MsJewel



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i like this...reminds me of the Lovin'
Spoonful..."you and me and rain on the roof, caught up in a summer shower, drying while it soaks the flowers"

a tribute to both...isn't it interesting...most people complain about the rain, and yet...there seems to be more romance during showers.
nicely laid out on the page, Julie
j.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

6 Months Ago

Thanks so much Jacob :) Julie



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If it were then a fine one to leave with Miss J...

Posted 6 Months Ago


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MsJewel

6 Months Ago

Thank you :) Julie
water adds that erotic element, steamy when on naked skin, a fine write Julie but not your last love poem!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

6 Months Ago

No...I can't imagine the last. Thank you Andrew :) Julie
Lovely and eloquent. Love and rain just seem to enhance each other. "Whispering of rainbows forevermore"-beautiful imagery. Loved this!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

6 Months Ago

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I appreciate it very much :) Julie
beautiful, I loved the way you displayed it visually

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

6 Months Ago

Thank you :) Julie
i like this...reminds me of the Lovin'
Spoonful..."you and me and rain on the roof, caught up in a summer shower, drying while it soaks the flowers"

a tribute to both...isn't it interesting...most people complain about the rain, and yet...there seems to be more romance during showers.
nicely laid out on the page, Julie
j.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

6 Months Ago

Thanks so much Jacob :) Julie
A romantic and sensual gem. Loved the picture you've displayed with your poem as well. Great work, a loving masterpiece. :)

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is absolutely beautiful! Well done, Julie. I enjoyed reading it :)

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

6 Months Ago

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thank you :) Julie
The title dragged me in too. I thought this was gong to be a sad read but the sensuality and imagery in this touched me. Beautifully penned, Julie.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

6 Months Ago

You are very sweet. Thank you :) Julie
Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

You're welcome. A pleasure always 😊
Soft, gentle and amazing words for love.
"Yes, if this were the last love poem ever written
it would be for you…
and the rain"
I liked the above lines dear Julie. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Months Ago


So simple yet so beautiful. When I read the title, I didn't know what the poem would be about, but as I read, I couldn't help but be swept away by your wonderful words. I love how the title tricks the reader into thinking it's quite literally your last love poem (but I knew that couldn't be so) but the piece itself builds on that in an unexpected way. I also like the subtle symbolism in how the falling rain represents the beauty of falling in love. Lovely work!

- William Liston

Posted 6 Months Ago



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MsJewel
MsJewel

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I've been writing poetry for 15 years. My poetry isn't unique in any way, but it is written from the heart. I have trouble keeping up with everyone's poetry, so please send me rr's. I enjoy rec.. more..

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