The Last Love Poem

The Last Love Poem

A Poem by MsJewel
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"If this were the last love poem...."

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 The Last Love Poem

 

If this were the last love poem ever written

it would be for you, my love

and the rain…

 

falling softly on the roses

 

I fell too

for your eyes,

 pools of liquid moonlight

and your kisses,

whispering of rainbows forevermore

 

Yes, if this were the last love poem ever written

it would be for you…

 

and the rain


© 2017 MsJewel



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i like this...reminds me of the Lovin'
Spoonful..."you and me and rain on the roof, caught up in a summer shower, drying while it soaks the flowers"

a tribute to both...isn't it interesting...most people complain about the rain, and yet...there seems to be more romance during showers.
nicely laid out on the page, Julie
j.

Posted 4 Months Ago


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MsJewel

4 Months Ago

Thanks so much Jacob :) Julie



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This is a romantic tangle of imagery that feels like it's tumbling & dripping along thru the revelations. When I read the title, quite honestly, I was wondering what ambitious statement this might be? I mean, the set-up is such that we expect something very "TA!DA!" But then this playful sensuous scrambled little ditty spills out & makes much more sense than any high-minded love pronouncement could be! You help teach me about being purposefully inadvertent.

Posted 4 Months Ago


What comes after the rain...? I suppose nothing, nothing but the echo of a ghost of love... Liquidly penned...

Posted 4 Months Ago


It was so pleasing to read. I liked the sentence If this were the last love poem ever written it would be for you and the rain.

Posted 4 Months Ago


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perfect words and image...enjoyed

Posted 4 Months Ago


Love the picture. This is beautiful! Your imagery and ability to make nature a feeling is amazing! LOVE! LOVE! LOVE!
Tabby

Posted 4 Months Ago


Aloha Julie, so beautifully romantic. I love the way you fused the mood with rain. Something magical about that. Izzy

Posted 4 Months Ago


Beautiful and sincere.
We dream of everlasting love and hope to enjoy it forever... yet we never know when it might go away.
So we make the best and know with each storm a rainbow is promised.
Write each poem in dedication to who and what you love as though it may be your last...... and pray for rain.

Huggs... TRACE.

Posted 4 Months Ago


I love the different moods you always show in your poetry you have a beautiful ways expressing them even when it hurt so much to do so it reach out to you and pull you in. :) Larry

Posted 4 Months Ago


onceloved

3 Months Ago

You are more than welcome Julie :) Larry
Gorgeous read, beautifully done dear :) x

Posted 4 Months Ago


I love to construe the element of rain within a poem. It's always been such a comfort to me, as far back as I can remember. This reads hauntingly as well as beautifully, Julie, for we shall never know which poem will be our last!



Posted 4 Months Ago



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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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I've been writing poetry for 15 years. My poetry isn't unique in any way, but it is written from the heart. I have trouble keeping up with everyone's poetry, so please send me rr's. I enjoy rec.. more..

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