The Last Love Poem

The Last Love Poem

A Poem by MsJewel
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"If this were the last love poem...."

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 The Last Love Poem

 

If this were the last love poem ever written

it would be for you, my love

and the rain…

 

falling softly on the roses

 

I fell too

for your eyes,

 pools of liquid moonlight

and your kisses,

whispering of rainbows forevermore

 

Yes, if this were the last love poem ever written

it would be for you…

 

and the rain


© 2017 MsJewel



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I really enjoy this poem, I love the hyperbole of the last love poem, I love the importance it gives itself to say that the object of the speakers affection would be it, the absolute last. You have a lovely way with words, and I like your word placement. Well done!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

6 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie



Reviews

Beautiful and sincere.
We dream of everlasting love and hope to enjoy it forever... yet we never know when it might go away.
So we make the best and know with each storm a rainbow is promised.
Write each poem in dedication to who and what you love as though it may be your last...... and pray for rain.

Huggs... TRACE.

Posted 1 Year Ago


I love the different moods you always show in your poetry you have a beautiful ways expressing them even when it hurt so much to do so it reach out to you and pull you in. :) Larry

Posted 1 Year Ago


onceloved

1 Year Ago

You are more than welcome Julie :) Larry
Gorgeous read, beautifully done dear :) x

Posted 1 Year Ago


I love to construe the element of rain within a poem. It's always been such a comfort to me, as far back as I can remember. This reads hauntingly as well as beautifully, Julie, for we shall never know which poem will be our last!



Posted 1 Year Ago


Behold! A poem that speaks to the soul and will reverberate for a long time to come in the mind and heart too. Excellent Julie!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Both holding a magical place indeed, this is so beautiful...so intensely romantic and very wonderfully poised, stunning...

Posted 1 Year Ago


Heavy sigh.....no, it will never be the last love poem. There will always be more written even if about the same lost love. Beautifully written. Lydi**

Posted 1 Year Ago


Intensely romantic and touching from the deep wells of romance. A culmination of all that is felt and lived...:)................

Posted 1 Year Ago


hmm. doesn't get much deeper than this. these words strike the chords of love, beauty, and passion with a gentle caress in the most delicate and effective manner. makes me take a deep breath and sigh hypnotically. pic adds.

Posted 1 Year Ago


A highly romantic piece Julie. Soft and full of old fashioned passionate intimacy.

Posted 1 Year Ago



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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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I've been writing poetry for 15 years. My poetry isn't unique in any way, but it is written from the heart. I have trouble keeping up with everyone's poetry, so please send me rr's. I enjoy rec.. more..

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