The Last Love Poem

The Last Love Poem

A Poem by MsJewel

"If this were the last love poem...."


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 The Last Love Poem


If this were the last love poem ever written

it would be for you, my love

and the rain…


falling softly on the roses


I fell too

for your eyes,

 pools of liquid moonlight

and your kisses,

whispering of rainbows forevermore


Yes, if this were the last love poem ever written

it would be for you…


and the rain

© 2017 MsJewel

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i like this...reminds me of the Lovin'
Spoonful..."you and me and rain on the roof, caught up in a summer shower, drying while it soaks the flowers"

a tribute to both...isn't it interesting...most people complain about the rain, and yet...there seems to be more romance during showers.
nicely laid out on the page, Julie

Posted 9 Months Ago

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8 Months Ago

Thanks so much Jacob :) Julie


I love to construe the element of rain within a poem. It's always been such a comfort to me, as far back as I can remember. This reads hauntingly as well as beautifully, Julie, for we shall never know which poem will be our last!

Posted 9 Months Ago

Behold! A poem that speaks to the soul and will reverberate for a long time to come in the mind and heart too. Excellent Julie!

Posted 9 Months Ago

Both holding a magical place indeed, this is so intensely romantic and very wonderfully poised, stunning...

Posted 9 Months Ago

Heavy, it will never be the last love poem. There will always be more written even if about the same lost love. Beautifully written. Lydi**

Posted 9 Months Ago

Intensely romantic and touching from the deep wells of romance. A culmination of all that is felt and lived...:)................

Posted 9 Months Ago

hmm. doesn't get much deeper than this. these words strike the chords of love, beauty, and passion with a gentle caress in the most delicate and effective manner. makes me take a deep breath and sigh hypnotically. pic adds.

Posted 9 Months Ago

A highly romantic piece Julie. Soft and full of old fashioned passionate intimacy.

Posted 9 Months Ago

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Added on May 23, 2017
Last Updated on May 23, 2017
Tags: Love, romance, rain, msjewel, poetry



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