The Last Love Poem

The Last Love Poem

A Poem by MsJewel
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"If this were the last love poem...."

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 The Last Love Poem

 

If this were the last love poem ever written

it would be for you, my love

and the rain…

 

falling softly on the roses

 

I fell too

for your eyes,

 pools of liquid moonlight

and your kisses,

whispering of rainbows forevermore

 

Yes, if this were the last love poem ever written

it would be for you…

 

and the rain


© 2017 MsJewel



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i like this...reminds me of the Lovin'
Spoonful..."you and me and rain on the roof, caught up in a summer shower, drying while it soaks the flowers"

a tribute to both...isn't it interesting...most people complain about the rain, and yet...there seems to be more romance during showers.
nicely laid out on the page, Julie
j.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

6 Months Ago

Thanks so much Jacob :) Julie



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Behold! A poem that speaks to the soul and will reverberate for a long time to come in the mind and heart too. Excellent Julie!

Posted 6 Months Ago


Both holding a magical place indeed, this is so beautiful...so intensely romantic and very wonderfully poised, stunning...

Posted 6 Months Ago


Heavy sigh.....no, it will never be the last love poem. There will always be more written even if about the same lost love. Beautifully written. Lydi**

Posted 6 Months Ago


Intensely romantic and touching from the deep wells of romance. A culmination of all that is felt and lived...:)................

Posted 6 Months Ago


hmm. doesn't get much deeper than this. these words strike the chords of love, beauty, and passion with a gentle caress in the most delicate and effective manner. makes me take a deep breath and sigh hypnotically. pic adds.

Posted 6 Months Ago


A highly romantic piece Julie. Soft and full of old fashioned passionate intimacy.

Posted 6 Months Ago



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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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I've been writing poetry for 15 years. My poetry isn't unique in any way, but it is written from the heart. I have trouble keeping up with everyone's poetry, so please send me rr's. I enjoy rec.. more..

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