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A Poem by MsJewel
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~ a love poem ~

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Rivers flow, oceans rise

behind the stars in his eyes

I’ve counted each one you see

bathed in reveries

of satin tides, waves of silk,

moonlight pale as milk

Drifting gently to the sound

of his heartbeat….

 

I am found

~~~


© 2017 MsJewel



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This is very smooth. The rhythm, the imagery, almost feels like the waves crashing and receding, or like a faint murmur on the ear.

"moonlight pale as milk" fav line.

Great ending too

"I am found"

Sudden. Almost like waking up from a reverie .

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

5 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie



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This is very smooth. The rhythm, the imagery, almost feels like the waves crashing and receding, or like a faint murmur on the ear.

"moonlight pale as milk" fav line.

Great ending too

"I am found"

Sudden. Almost like waking up from a reverie .

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

5 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
What a wonderful feeling to have been found- safe and sound- where we all would love to be- love it🌹

Posted 5 Months Ago


This poem celebrates love and affirms it with contentment.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Every piece of your's, you always get the feel and the flow bang on. Sweet, precise and colossally relative.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Softly strummed
or whispered gently
I fell into the rhythm...
I would love to hear you
read this ...
you have such a delicate
touch....100/100

Posted 9 Months Ago


You have to feel the euphoria of ecstasy to write this in just a few words.to feel the grace of love is a rare thing these days.thank you for sharing your heart with us.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Months Ago

You are very kind. Thank you :) Julie
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Gorgeous write. The words flowed like silk!

Posted 9 Months Ago


Sensuous, metaphorical and deeply romantic.
It is passionate and also well-presented. Love the Font used.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Drifting gently to the sound
of his heartbeat….

I am found

wow... its smooth as the silk itself... :)
loved it..

Posted 10 Months Ago



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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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