Found

Found

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ a love poem ~

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photograph compliments of pinterest


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Rivers flow, oceans rise

behind the stars in his eyes

I’ve counted each one you see

bathed in reveries

of satin tides, waves of silk,

moonlight pale as milk

Drifting gently to the sound

of his heartbeat….

 

I am found

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© 2017 MsJewel



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This is very smooth. The rhythm, the imagery, almost feels like the waves crashing and receding, or like a faint murmur on the ear.

"moonlight pale as milk" fav line.

Great ending too

"I am found"

Sudden. Almost like waking up from a reverie .

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

6 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie



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Drifting gently to the sound
of his heartbeat….

I am found

wow... its smooth as the silk itself... :)
loved it..

Posted 11 Months Ago


AWWW MAN,.. AWW. THAT'S THE S**T! PRETTY. LOL. CUTE AS F**K! LOL.. OH!! KEEP USING WORDS LIKE THAT!! I WANNA SEE, I WANNA SEE=

Posted 11 Months Ago


I love your poem thank you for sharing. this is nicet

Posted 1 Year Ago


"Rivers flow, oceans rise
behind the stars in his eyes
I’ve counted each one you see"

Posted 1 Year Ago


Such a beautiful way to say --I found love here!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Very beautifully described and written.

Posted 1 Year Ago


a soft and heartfelt write, julie. your love poems are so consistent and yet very uniquely written. always a sincere pleasure to read you dear friend.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Simple & heartfelt & gently-expressed with good imagery. Love your rhyming & word choices that help a reader actually FEEL what you're describing!

Posted 1 Year Ago


I... I am found, gently drifting, gently soaking up the reverie of each lashed kiss... A flowing like rivers go, and on the ocean I know the moon will glow... Gorgeously penned...

Posted 1 Year Ago



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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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I've been writing poetry for 15 years. My poetry isn't unique in any way, but it is written from the heart. I have trouble keeping up with everyone's poetry, so please send me rr's. I enjoy rec.. more..

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