Found

~ a love poem ~

photograph compliments of pinterest

~~~

Rivers flow, oceans rise

behind the stars in his eyes

I’ve counted each one you see

bathed in reveries

of satin tides, waves of silk,

moonlight pale as milk

Drifting gently to the sound

of his heartbeat….

 

I am found

~~~

Reviews

[Alessander]

This is very smooth. The rhythm, the imagery, almost feels like the waves crashing and receding, or like a faint murmur on the ear.

"moonlight pale as milk" fav line.

Great ending too

"I am found"

Sudden. Almost like waking up from a reverie .

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Island Hippy]

Aloha Julie, this is so elegant and fragrant with romance. Beautiful writing. Izzy

[MsJewel]

Thank you lovely lady. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it :) Julie

[Moonie]

Very gentle and sensual!! My favourite lines are:
"of satin tides, waves of silk,
moonlight pale as milk"

[MsJewel]

Those are my favorites too. Thanks so much for stopping by and leaving a lovely comment :) Julie

[Tabby Mac]

I. Just. Can't! You have a beautiful, elegant, classy way of illustrating love! And I LOVE it!! It's like an aroma that draws the reader in and as we inhale the words literally warm the soul!
Your unique way of expressing romance is AWESOME SAUCE! Another great write! Impressive!!
Tabby

[MsJewel]

You are so kind. Thank you my sweet friend. :) Julie

[Hi]

Gentle, sweet, and affirming. Nicely done.

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much Matt :) Julie

[Einstein Noodle]

your approach is so soft, sensual and fills me with love and desire ... always pleasant to read .. always emotive ... and i walk away so happy in love ;)))
E.

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it my dear friend. :) Julie

[An owl on the moon]

So gently flowing, caressing each line with softness and warmth. There is a tender beauty that rises when loving becomes liquid light, and you express this so deeply.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[An owl on the moon]

Your poetry always provides a sweet escape. :)

[Trace]

I like the back and forth motion of the words in rhyme
Like the waves of an ocean
Pulling you in and letting you enjoy the feeling as they crash against your soul.

Nicely done.
Hugs. Trace

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend. Hugs, Julie

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Julie... eyes are oceans of dreams come true.
I agree you have that golden touch of romance.
truly, Pat

[MsJewel]

Thank you Pat. I appreciate you and your friendship :) Julie

[Giulia King]

This is amazing! So short but outstanding! Well done, Julie. I loved reading this :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie