Found

Found

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ a love poem ~

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photograph compliments of pinterest


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Rivers flow, oceans rise

behind the stars in his eyes

I’ve counted each one you see

bathed in reveries

of satin tides, waves of silk,

moonlight pale as milk

Drifting gently to the sound

of his heartbeat….

 

I am found

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© 2017 MsJewel



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This is very smooth. The rhythm, the imagery, almost feels like the waves crashing and receding, or like a faint murmur on the ear.

"moonlight pale as milk" fav line.

Great ending too

"I am found"

Sudden. Almost like waking up from a reverie .

Posted 1 Month Ago


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MsJewel

1 Month Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie



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Very gentle and sensual!! My favourite lines are:
"of satin tides, waves of silk,
moonlight pale as milk"

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Months Ago

Those are my favorites too. Thanks so much for stopping by and leaving a lovely comment :) Julie
I. Just. Can't! You have a beautiful, elegant, classy way of illustrating love! And I LOVE it!! It's like an aroma that draws the reader in and as we inhale the words literally warm the soul!
Your unique way of expressing romance is AWESOME SAUCE! Another great write! Impressive!!
Tabby

Posted 10 Months Ago


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MsJewel

10 Months Ago

You are so kind. Thank you my sweet friend. :) Julie
Gentle, sweet, and affirming. Nicely done.

Posted 10 Months Ago


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MsJewel

10 Months Ago

Thanks so much Matt :) Julie
your approach is so soft, sensual and fills me with love and desire ... always pleasant to read .. always emotive ... and i walk away so happy in love ;)))
E.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Months Ago

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it my dear friend. :) Julie
So gently flowing, caressing each line with softness and warmth. There is a tender beauty that rises when loving becomes liquid light, and you express this so deeply.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
An owl on the moon

9 Months Ago

Your poetry always provides a sweet escape. :)
I like the back and forth motion of the words in rhyme
Like the waves of an ocean
Pulling you in and letting you enjoy the feeling as they crash against your soul.

Nicely done.
Hugs. Trace

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Months Ago

Thank you my sweet friend. Hugs, Julie
dear Julie... eyes are oceans of dreams come true.
I agree you have that golden touch of romance.
truly, Pat

Posted 10 Months Ago


MsJewel

10 Months Ago

Thank you Pat. I appreciate you and your friendship :) Julie
This is amazing! So short but outstanding! Well done, Julie. I loved reading this :)

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
Gorgeous read Julie, enjoyed :) x

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Months Ago

Thank you :) Julie

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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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