A Poem by MsJewel

~ a love poem ~


photograph compliments of pinterest


Rivers flow, oceans rise

behind the stars in his eyes

I’ve counted each one you see

bathed in reveries

of satin tides, waves of silk,

moonlight pale as milk

Drifting gently to the sound

of his heartbeat….


I am found


© 2017 MsJewel

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I. Just. Can't! You have a beautiful, elegant, classy way of illustrating love! And I LOVE it!! It's like an aroma that draws the reader in and as we inhale the words literally warm the soul!
Your unique way of expressing romance is AWESOME SAUCE! Another great write! Impressive!!

Posted 5 Months Ago

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5 Months Ago

You are so kind. Thank you my sweet friend. :) Julie


Yes passions rise in this exchange! Finely written Julie, I think the kettle is boiling in this one!

Posted 6 Months Ago

Julie, a big and deep SIGH and besides wanting to say 'you are found', I am glad you did not describe as a "scribble" cause even if it was a random thought written down on a lunch time napkin, smeared with a bit of mustard, this poem would take away the breath of all the romantics in the world and beyond and the collective sigh would reach back to the big bang... but in this poem there is nothing out of place, each emotion finely tuned in reveries and satin tides... if this isn't love, and sensuality and heart beats all in one then I am clueless when it comes to romance and love or anything for that matter... I seriously hope you know just how good a poet you really are Julie..


Posted 6 Months Ago

Sensual and soft, warm and willing, this one whispers into the ear. Beautiful!

Posted 6 Months Ago

...a love poem, scribble, nothing less! I loved the sensuality you weaved through this, Julie...truly mesmerizing.

Posted 6 Months Ago

very powerful. can feel the passionate connection flowing in that river. majestically effective. perfect imagery, both words & pic, capture beautifully. you always do such a wonderful job in the romance department.

Posted 6 Months Ago

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Perfect! Always enjoy your words. Thank you.

Posted 6 Months Ago

The kind of poetry I wanna read or listen to while cuddling with my love. Suits the mood.

Posted 6 Months Ago

beautiful beautiful beautiful love your work
may i add you as a friend?

Posted 6 Months Ago

Beautiful seems a small word to describe this write. I love this :)

Posted 6 Months Ago

Your forte is marvelously stated in words and images. Thank you for keeping this site romanticized...:).............

Posted 6 Months Ago

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54 Reviews
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Added on June 11, 2017
Last Updated on June 11, 2017
Tags: romance, love, msjewel, poetry



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I've been writing poetry for 15 years. My poetry isn't unique in any way, but it is written from the heart. I have trouble keeping up with everyone's poetry, so please send me rr's. I enjoy rec.. more..


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