Found

Found

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ a love poem ~

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photograph compliments of pinterest


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Rivers flow, oceans rise

behind the stars in his eyes

I’ve counted each one you see

bathed in reveries

of satin tides, waves of silk,

moonlight pale as milk

Drifting gently to the sound

of his heartbeat….

 

I am found

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© 2017 MsJewel



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This is very smooth. The rhythm, the imagery, almost feels like the waves crashing and receding, or like a faint murmur on the ear.

"moonlight pale as milk" fav line.

Great ending too

"I am found"

Sudden. Almost like waking up from a reverie .

Posted 6 Months Ago


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MsJewel

6 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie



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Gorgeous read Julie, enjoyed :) x

Posted 1 Year Ago


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MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you :) Julie
This is very nice and it had a great flow in which you feel like singing at certain mood. I loved this work :D

Posted 1 Year Ago


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MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie
This is my favorite of yours....a shining gem among many treasures. Stunning dear Julie :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


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MsJewel

1 Year Ago

You are very kind Ana. Thanks so much :) Julie
Photo and words. Amazing place to know and be. Being intimate and fearless. Needed and wanted days and nights by the all of us. Thank you dear Julie for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


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MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you John :) Julie
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome dear Julie.
i like the brevity here...the sharpness of tone in a gentle breezy love echo.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Year Ago

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it Jacob. Thanks so much :) Julie
Yes passions rise in this exchange! Finely written Julie, I think the kettle is boiling in this one!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Julie, a big and deep SIGH and besides wanting to say 'you are found', I am glad you did not describe as a "scribble" cause even if it was a random thought written down on a lunch time napkin, smeared with a bit of mustard, this poem would take away the breath of all the romantics in the world and beyond and the collective sigh would reach back to the big bang... but in this poem there is nothing out of place, each emotion finely tuned in reveries and satin tides... if this isn't love, and sensuality and heart beats all in one then I am clueless when it comes to romance and love or anything for that matter... I seriously hope you know just how good a poet you really are Julie..

redzone

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sensual and soft, warm and willing, this one whispers into the ear. Beautiful!

Posted 1 Year Ago


...a love poem, indeed...no scribble, nothing less! I loved the sensuality you weaved through this, Julie...truly mesmerizing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


very powerful. can feel the passionate connection flowing in that river. majestically effective. perfect imagery, both words & pic, capture beautifully. you always do such a wonderful job in the romance department.

Posted 1 Year Ago



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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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