Chasing Cars

Chasing Cars

A Poem by MsJewel

                       

          

                        Speedster, by Porsche.  Born in '75, like me. 

                        Challenge me, if you wish

                        but tell me this…

                        Gentlemen, when you start your engines do they return the favor?

 

                        I don't know what to expect of you

                        yet

                        I demand everything of you

                        Even the impossible

                        because you encourage it

 

                        Men chase women they have no intentions of marrying

                        dogs chase cars they have no intention of driving

 

                        You think you fool me

                        but I like your deceit

                        Rotten as the apple fallen from the tree

 

                        No James Dean here to lend me his coat

                        but you fuel my hunger…

                        delightfully naughty

 

                        And…

 

                        You could love me

                        under the starry sky

                        Silky and smooth,

                        my skin like liquid moonlight

 

                        And still….

                        I would leave you

                        naked and trembling in the backseat

                        Wishing

                        you were chasing cars

© 2019 MsJewel


Author's Note

MsJewel
Photograph - compliments of Pinterest
Poetry by MsJewel

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now this was a "Friday night" poem... powerful and steamy... while I never woke up in the back seat naked, I did like to chase cars.... but alas, they were always too fast and got away before I could bite their tires... er.. sorry, my wolf totem spirit took over there for a minute... lol...

about the poem... did I mention powerful and steamy???? so a Porsche huh, sleek, silver streak rolling down the street but Julie, the back seat was way to small for an adventure... but in '75, my 58 chevy… well... er… never mind... lol..

seriously, I enjoyed your poem and all your "naughty delightfullies"....
Glad I found this poem as I have missed reading your poetry Julie...

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

5 Months Ago

Thank you for your delightful comment. It's always lovely when you visit my page :) Julie



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Va room... boom, boom... ack, screech. splat! bunny just ran into a telephone pole with his 1969 gremlin hatchback, staring at that fancy Porsche driver:) Sexy write love the dialogue flow just draws me in natural, very neat trick! you have a transcending voice. Throw in a great visual presence and you are the complete package in this write! I don't even mind having to wear a neck brace after they extricate me from the back seat.

Posted 1 Month Ago


A touch of class with this fine piece.
Thank you 😊

Posted 2 Months Ago


WOW! You steamed up the windows with this one! Well done. I love how classy yet sexy this is. You have a way with words that is for sure and you always pick the perfect picture to go with it! I love it!!!
Tabby

Posted 2 Months Ago


Streaming with speed and flash I seen the dogs get crushed by the cars and expensive vet bills about 1700 Bucks to fix the pet Golden Retriever They fixed him and he's still with us today.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Ms. Jewel I tip my awkward hat to you, truly you find truth, and bit of humour to offset the overall motif

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Months Ago

Thanks so much Jim :) Julie
For the Alpha males this is fuel for their engines! All others are left under the rear tire or choking on exhaust. Such vivid images and sensations in your words, and the self assurance in each stanza is artfully portrayed. Love the pic and the last stanza!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Months Ago

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the kind review. :) Julie
It is such a good and risqué poem although I have never had sex, I could tell. But the picture portrayed as a theme is really inviting and brings to the mind only one thing.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Julie,
I love this poem. It has bite, attitude and I'll call the shots around here. I could see Shania Twain singing your words. Great imagery, you rocked this one!
Joyful Blessings,
Richie b.

Posted 4 Months Ago


This had me smiling. What they think they 'can' do and what we do in turn ;) Love the ending here! Very powerful indeed and a lovely read. :))

Posted 4 Months Ago


a good fling is priceless. both high-maintenance. rebels without a cause. a case of be careful what you wish for - you just might get it perhaps? men and their toys. love 'em and leave 'em. who's really driving? you've packed a lot of power under the hood of this. to be handled with care. really great. I love it ... :)

'Men chase women they have no intentions of marrying

dogs chase cars they have no intention of driving'

Posted 4 Months Ago



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MsJewel

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