Braided Girl

Braided Girl

A Poem by Junert
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Just studying the kids in my class.

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I know a girl with braids.
Twirled and twisted and black.
With regular rubber bands;
red and green, blue and yellow.
Dangling like many maggots,
On a black head.

© 2013 Junert



Author's Note

Junert
Guess I can do poems after all. Though weak ones.

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I know this, thanks for reminding me. Nice work

Posted 2 Years Ago


I like the imagery here. I think your right though, it could be stronger :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Junert

3 Years Ago

Wow you are the first to review this though it's been here long. Thanks. Yeah not strong.

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Added on August 25, 2013
Last Updated on August 25, 2013
Tags: braids, rows

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Junert
Junert

Tema, Greater Accra, Ghana



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