Braided Girl

Just studying the kids in my class.

I know a girl with braids.
Twirled and twisted and black.
With regular rubber bands;
red and green, blue and yellow.
Dangling like many maggots,
On a black head.

Author's Note

Guess I can do poems after all. Though weak ones.

Reviews

[BriBri]

I know this, thanks for reminding me. Nice work

[Shaquana Adams]

I like the imagery here. I think your right though, it could be stronger :)

[Junert]

Wow you are the first to review this though it's been here long. Thanks. Yeah not strong.