Forever Yearning

Forever Yearning

A Poem by Jupiter Jazz

My life is not my own.

Use me as you will.

My puppet strings forever attached, prance me about for your pleasure.

Emotions are not needed.

I dance, I dance, I sway and lift my arms to the sky.

My face is tilted up, yearning for an unreachable freedom.

Wind rushes through the land, seeking, seeking.

The wind twirls, I twirl with it.

The wind runs, I run with it.

The wind lifts, I… remain on the ground, tied down by puppet strings…

An unreachable freedom.

I dance, I dance, I sway and lift my arms to the sky.

Yearning, forever yearning, for an unreachable freedom.




 well done - Forever Yearningsad poems. one day writing contest

© 2011 Jupiter Jazz


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Jupiter Jazz
This came to me while thinking about two separate poems.

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What were the poems? I think this is beautiful. A lot of inspirational comes from what we already know. If not its our active imagination. Which I don't know what I would do without it. I really am enjoying your writing. I can't wait to read it all. Fantastic job. :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I like this and it's totally relateabkle. i'm sure we feel that we don't have control over our lives at some point, especially when ur a teenager. great write! ^^

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is true in many ways. This happens to many people everyday. Some times more than others. I loved this poem. Keep writing! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is so deep and yet so ethereal. I absolutely love it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautifully done! Nice write :)
I often have multiple poems in mind when only trying to write one. Well, it looks like you don't have to worry about any weird effects from that, because this is wonderful. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This poem is so lovely and sometimes for people who have suffered from something can feel that way that freedom is just out of there reach and there held back or held down.I can't wait to read your other poems.Good job :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What were the poems? I think this is beautiful. A lot of inspirational comes from what we already know. If not its our active imagination. Which I don't know what I would do without it. I really am enjoying your writing. I can't wait to read it all. Fantastic job. :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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A Poem by Jupiter Jazz