Haikus

Haikus

A Poem by Jupiter Jazz
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Series of haikus.

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With no shame, roar loud.

Rage, scream, against the machine.

Without faith, their's death.

 

Silent is the stream.

But aggressive is the wind,

Nature rages on.

 

Love is a phoenix,

It dies but rises again.

Determined and strong.

 

Silently, it stalks.

Stealthly, it follows it's prey.

Pounce! The lynx attacks.

 

The snow shines at night.

The stars sparkle like diamonds.

Winter, how lovely.

© 2011 Jupiter Jazz


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Jupiter Jazz
I was bored at work... what do you think??

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Very nice write, i love the lines, so interesting. A enjoyable read for sure.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nice string of haikus

Posted 12 Years Ago


These are pretty clever...what happened to the second line of the final verse? And where is "En View", which apparently I reviewed Saturday, but now I cannot remember what I wrote...You probably don't have that much to do with us old guys, but that's a rather prevalent trait, you might as well know.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Haikus are hit or miss and you hit on every single one. Well done. The only flaw I see is that line in yellow. It's killing my eyes.

Posted 12 Years Ago


this is very well done

Posted 12 Years Ago


These worked well. I liked it a lot.
♥ Ta'Shandra

Posted 12 Years Ago



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