Summer Breeze

Summer Breeze

A Poem by Jupiter Jazz
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Petals caught in a breeze

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Dancing gracefully to a silent tune,

Fluttering in the breeze,

Spinning round and round and round,

Entrapped in a circular stream.

Flashes of pink and orange and yellow and lilac,

Dipping and twirling in the southern wind.

Butterflies and bees join in the waltz,

Delighting in a flamboyant spin,

The sun shines down on the happy dance,

Casting shadows of multi-colored hues.

A joyous dance,

A perpetual dance,

That sweetens the heart and imbues.

© 2011 Jupiter Jazz


Author's Note

Jupiter Jazz
I was inspired by watching some petal caught in a draft.

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I enjoyed the poem and loved the colored font that you used. Well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A happy poem! haha. it reminds me of how beautiful the earth once was. and kind of still is in some places. like...irreland. lol.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

NICE!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love the colorful poem and the colorful tone of the poem. It reminds me exactly of how a summer breeze should feel like and the way you describe the petal dancing in the wind is very picturesque and beautiful. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sounds serene. i like the picture you painted for us and how you got the words in different colors. great write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderful, my friend. Keep up the hard work. Keep writing! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love this! The colours mix in so well with the poem and why you wrote it! Fab write :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow! This is totally colorful! Haha! Great poem! Short but really enjoyable to read!~ :)))

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love how little things can be so inspiring :) this was a great write! I love our word choice for this..it's peaceful and soft and gentle. I found it very soothing. Great job again Jupiter, and thank you for posting!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a joy and delightful poem to read.
I love summer, my favorite season of the
year. Wonderful poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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