I fall

I fall

A Poem by JustNonsenseAndSugar
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An angel falls...

"
I fall.
A star,
A wish.

I fall
and clutch
featherless wings.

I crawl
like the snake
of the dust.

I crawl
In pain
and Fury.

I shall rise
Again
and conquer.

But I fell
Too far
To rise.

The stars, 
They watch
my falling.

And I lay
and hold
my wings.

Falling
Fallen
Fell...

© 2017 JustNonsenseAndSugar



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Effectively Amazing...as it is Amazingly Effective
fabulous...I feel each wave of despair
the form takes this gem all the way home

Posted 2 Months Ago


A delightful collection of words crafted into a delightfully descending cascade of angst and anguish...Nice one, my friend, Neville

Posted 7 Months Ago


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JustNonsenseAndSugar
JustNonsenseAndSugar

Somewhere, MI



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