Poetry

Poetry

A Poem by JustNonsenseAndSugar

My Poetry is horrible,
positively borable,
simply deplorable. 
I need to stop,
I can't make it to the top.
My tears are staining
my keyboard keys,
Please hear my screamed pleas:
destroy my writing plans.
Burn my notebooks
and break my pens.


© 2017 JustNonsenseAndSugar



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Your writing is your inner voice. No matter if is real poetry or not. Your mother don't tell you what you can improve. Don't listen to advice where is not strong message what you can do better. When you will continute writing every day. You will realize how your writing can be strong. I read some of your poetry and I think you got very strong style. Don't stop writing you are on the good way.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

BANISHED

7 Months Ago

You don't have to be nervous about your poetry. Here on this site is nobody perfect . Keep writing a.. read more
JustNonsenseAndSugar

7 Months Ago

You as well
BANISHED

7 Months Ago

Thank you.



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Your writing is your inner voice. No matter if is real poetry or not. Your mother don't tell you what you can improve. Don't listen to advice where is not strong message what you can do better. When you will continute writing every day. You will realize how your writing can be strong. I read some of your poetry and I think you got very strong style. Don't stop writing you are on the good way.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

BANISHED

7 Months Ago

You don't have to be nervous about your poetry. Here on this site is nobody perfect . Keep writing a.. read more
JustNonsenseAndSugar

7 Months Ago

You as well
BANISHED

7 Months Ago

Thank you.
So kind of an explanation for this. My mum asked to read some of my poetry and I let her see my Dancer poem and she told me "You'll never get anywhere with this s**t." Normally my mum is very helpful and kind about my writing so it came as a pretty big shock.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Gee

8 Months Ago

Each to their own,. It ain't s**t by a long stretch and if you enjoy writing then crack on...
JustNonsenseAndSugar

8 Months Ago

Thank you Gee
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Added on November 20, 2017
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JustNonsenseAndSugar
JustNonsenseAndSugar

Somewhere, MI



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I lack understanding of others so it is difficult for me to comment on your writing. If you ask me to specifically, I will try to do my best however. I will try to comment on writing but I normally av.. more..

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