A Prisoner to Emotion

All these tears, yearning to be set free,
All these words, begging to be let loose,
All these hurts, longing to find relife,
all bottled up, with an invisible stopper.

All these thoughts, dying to be told,
All these wishes, desperatly clinging to survive,
All these emotions, fighting to get to the surface,
all chocked off, before they have the chance to live.

All this anger, craving to see the world,
All this hate, climbing to the outside,
All this love, shriveling in to nothingness,
all represed, so they have no chance to hurt another.

A prisoner to emotion, never to see the light,
A prisoner to life, always in pain,
A prisoner to myself, failing at all things,
a hurt, forever to go unhealed.
 

Reviews

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

Man this is good...sounds like me...in some of it anyway...you did an amazing job...oh and i just love this pic...lol

[Laura Ex]

i like the emotion you put through this piece. although there are a few typos, the meaning is clear and i really love this poem. :]

[Alz Alz]

i like the title. great writing!

[M. Amphet Salt]

A Very, Very, Very good piece. It is almost perfect and I really felt it.

[Phantom Heart]

The emotion here is so raw it's amazing. Your depression and anguish are well depicted. Very nice write.

[17thWhitePrince]

WoW !!!
Great Poem !!!
So Much Emotion ... :(
So Much Sorrow ... :(
So Much Pain ... :(
Well Written Indeed !!!