My Sock

My Sock

A Poem by justice

My sock
caught a snag
and a single thread
unraveled.

Without a thought,
I pulled the strand

And now,
I am left
with nothing
but a pile of cotton

I have a terrible habit
of dragging my feet.

© 2011 justice


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justice
Just a thought... what do you think?

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This is so sweet :)
and creative!
Great work!

Posted 13 Years Ago


EXCELLENT! Very clever love! Serious kudos lol You have connected all to an intelligent level, the final line - CLASSIC lol xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


A poem about socks. Funny things we do need the socks. Without them we would have sore and painful feet. I like the poem. I'm lucky. I marry a seamstress. Can repair those beat up and worn socks. A very good poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


hahah socks! :D i like it. smiple and cute.

Posted 13 Years Ago


a very different poem, well written and easy to read. I like it :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


a small decision can change our life....humorous...loved the sattire

Posted 13 Years Ago


It's a nice way of thinking. I like it and the humor

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Posted 13 Years Ago


Quite amusing. Life as a sock...

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Posted 13 Years Ago


lol I like this. Makes me think of a old I Love Lucy episode.

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Posted 13 Years Ago


i think you make the every day things turn to gold in your poems love it

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Posted 13 Years Ago



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justice

Omaha, NE



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