Evil Eye

Evil Eye

A Poem by Justin Street

Glaring from the dark
Its piercing iris
Takes me whole

Eyes of evil
Wait to kill
A silent mold

Take the breath
From cold lips
And your heads will roll

Evil eyes
I despise
Thy soul

© 2010 Justin Street


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

A really good write. Short, but straight to the point. :) A great piece overall.. Last stanza was my favourite part tbh. :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


Amazing poem. I wrote a song about my evil eye.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

[send message][befriend] Subscribe
(:
I love it.
The ending was strong and solemn.
This makes me think of the saying, "If looks could kill.."

Posted 13 Years Ago


I liked this.
My favorite part of this is
"I despise
Thy soul."
Thanks for sharing. :)


Posted 13 Years Ago


I love the "a silent mold". Delightfully unexpected, yet it fits.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Short simple stanza's but very powerful. Beautifully written.
"Piercing iris." is amazing.
The ending is very powerful. Very strong. Well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

414 Views
6 Reviews
Rating
Shelved in 1 Library
Added on May 19, 2010
Last Updated on May 24, 2010

Author

Justin Street
Justin Street

Clarksville, TN



About
Well I am Justin or Jt. I love photography, writing, and ping pong =). I can carry a conversation with pretty much anyone and everyone. =P The thing i love most is reviews =) so make me happy. I still.. more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Just words Just words

A Poem by SamBug