THE DEVIL YOU KNOW

Beautiful mind, restless soul

I want to be the ghost that haunts you

Brown eyed angel with the wandering heart

I want to be your sunset when you return

 

Fearless beast with the devilish smile

I want to be your choice of poison

Creature of darkness with the starlit eyes

I want to be the dawn that wakes you

 

Deceitful monster with the ruthless charm

I want to be the curse that plagues you

Savage warrior with the gentle touch

I want to be the war that breaks you

 

Ravish me with your endless fury

Let me wander in your empty hallways

Share with me your coldest winter

I want to be the fire that burns you

 

 

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

What a fiercely beautiful world you create for your Love... This seems the untamed life that surges like a river through the soul. Dark and wondrous. So thankful to have you back here!

[Jvonne]

Thank you friend!

[Pete]

better the one you know than the one you don't as they say. dangerously haunting write. be careful what you wish for - you just might get it and get burned. perhaps not a bad way to go though. good write ... :)

[Jvonne]

Thank you Pete :)

[TheJordBaker]

Absolutely captivating, from those first 2 lines I'm a fan of your writing.

[Jvonne]

Thank you!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

"Beautiful mind, restless soul
I want to be the ghost that haunts you
Brown eyed angel with the wandering heart
I want to be your sunset when you return"

There seems a hurtful quality to this but beautifully portrayed.
I liked the flow in it. Nicely penned 😊👍

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Oh but to burn and freeze are simply the mind at ease. Let me tell you the secret between letting go and being able. When fire and ice break war like spirits and dark souls, the only thing left to do is wait in between.

[ba_mcfarlane]

Erotic almost to painful and daring in its honesty.. Nicely done.

[Dr. Wood ?]

a riveting write that had me transfixed from beginning to end

[Jvonne]

Thank you.

[mercy party]

your writing connected well with me. Even though you covered so much subject matter it stayed on point. Theme development isn't always easy , i had no confusion on what i was reading about. The title helped : ). great work!

[Jvonne]

Thank you!

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Quite a different tone then the last...
this has aggressiveness...
in the make-up of the presentation...
gets to the reader and the feel of the write...

[A. Amos]

Ravish me with your endless fury
Let me wander in your empty hallways
Share with me your coldest winter
I want to be the fire that burns you

Gripping, catchy, interesting and sexy, very good job down. loved it