So they say

So they say

A Poem by Jyoti_Ablaze





They say people change in years,
but you changed me in a day.
They say life is long and hard,
but in your arms I floated and swayed


They mentioned about the darkness

that exists in the alleyway,
but you illumined me from within.


They proclaimed the world to be ravening,
but you kept me safe in your warm cocoon.


They say the day can be harsh
and the sun can give you blisters,
but you wrapped me tenderly
like the moon in the soothing night.


They believe the barren lands can never yield
but you transformed my impotent heart
into a loving blossom!





© 2016 Jyoti_Ablaze



Author's Note

Jyoti_Ablaze
Just words pouring out of my heart, for someone I am destined to fall for!
I am not in love, but will be someday.
Enjoy!
Please READ, REVIEW and RATE!
Thank you for your time!

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Woow....mind blowing ...fully commendable!!
Each and every line is just magical..

Posted 7 Months Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

7 Months Ago

Thank you, Ayush. Glad you liked it.
Wow dear... a beautiful work done...
got the one and only man of your life. He will love it, in future... and that's for sure...
Amazing piece showing the perfect thinking of a loving and innocent heart...
Love blossoms all around.... : )
Anindita : )

Posted 1 Year Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much for your kind words, Anindita!
Beautiful. People say a lot of things. May be they say from their experience. But what we really learn is from out own experiences ... I feel happy imagining this world described in your poem. Hugs

Posted 1 Year Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

1 Year Ago

Thank you Ananya. After all, the only person we are going to spend our lives with is - US. So why no.. read more
People says a lot about lot of things, right !!?
The only important things is what we feel about things around us what wraps us... You expressed it in en excellent way.... One of the best piece i have ever read.. I wish you wrote it from your life, and you are living and leading a life full of happiness... :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

1 Year Ago

Thank you Shuvadip, it's very kind of you to visit my humble pieces and leave encouraging reviews at.. read more
Shuvadip Mallik

1 Year Ago

yeah, but you added the writing many days ago. So I just hoped that maybe your imagination came true.. read more
Jyoti_Ablaze

1 Year Ago

Thank you. :)
This is an amazing poem! I love how you took all the negative cliches people throw out and turned them into your own positive meaning. I love when people do that. It shows genuine optimism and heart. One day you will find an amazing guy or girl or person in general (if gender is unspecified), and they will be so lucky to have met you. ;)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Treble

1 Year Ago

I figured you're a woman from your username and from your picture. But I just wanted to make sure I .. read more
Jyoti_Ablaze

1 Year Ago

Oh well thank you then. Its good to know oneself.
Treble

1 Year Ago

Sure thing :)
Such a sense of hope, truth, light- just how it feels when you love someone.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

1 Year Ago

Yes love is soothing and overwhelming at the same time.
Thank you for the kind visit.
love is a many splendored thing for sure ... the light and hope you present us in this poem is very uplifting ...i believe as you mention that the world is dark in too many places ... and your last two lines bring it all home in a personal way ..enjoyed reading Jyoti!
E.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

1 Year Ago

Love can become a reason to breathe.
Thank you for your warm review, E!
Glad you visi.. read more
Most beautiful poem as always
You have great talent
Keep it up !!!!!
Love it

Posted 1 Year Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

1 Year Ago

Thank you Zunie, for your loving review. Glad you visited.
Beautiful. If this is for someone, he must be a wonderful person.
And the praise made me felt little jealous. Haha kidding. I always like to say about the best lines in whatever I read.

Here it is-

They proclaimed the world to be ravening,
but you kept me safe in your warm cocoon.


Posted 1 Year Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your warm review! Glad you visited.
This, to me, is the very essence of love at its purest stage, its newness before world clutters and scolds with tainting experiences that makes us...turn into 'them that say'

Thanks for the 100/100 share

Posted 1 Year Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Antonyo! Glad you liked it!

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