So they say

So they say

A Poem by Jyoti_Ablaze





They say people change in years,
but you changed me in a day.
They say life is long and hard,
but in your arms I floated and swayed


They mentioned about the darkness

that exists in the alleyway,
but you illumined me from within.


They proclaimed the world to be ravening,
but you kept me safe in your warm cocoon.


They say the day can be harsh
and the sun can give you blisters,
but you wrapped me tenderly
like the moon in the soothing night.


They believe the barren lands can never yield
but you transformed my impotent heart
into a loving blossom!

© 2016 Jyoti_Ablaze


Author's Note

Jyoti_Ablaze
Just words pouring out of my heart, for someone I am destined to fall for!
I am not in love, but will be someday.
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wow a beautiful poem about changing. I wish i could be like you

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

8 Years Ago

Oh sweetie! You are already so good!
Thank you for the comment, I appreciate it. :)
"But you wrapped me tenderly
Like the moon in the soothing night."

Favorite line. Nice work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

8 Years Ago

Thank you. Glad you liked it.
this is a really sweet write----someone who has that capacity to make us feel really okay about ourselves, especially in the worst moments---
nicely expressed.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

8 Years Ago

Thank you for the kind review.
It is amazing, a miracle, how one person can transform us. And this miracle of words that flow from you have the kindest dedication to a true friend and teacher and guide. Beautifully, wonderfully full of light!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much Craig! Glad you were able to glimpse the light in it. :)
Awesome write... I loved your descriptions in this write! Very detailed, very warm and inviting words. I could really feel the way you felt about this person... a great write Jyoti :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much! Means a lot!
Its very rich. I like the wording and the theme. and I like the way the poem depicts the indifference of persona to the assumptions of the world. keep up the good work

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

8 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind review.
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Childhood crushes are really something :) the way he has transformed your life is evident through your tender words. The picture selected was quite apt, as well. I'm not sure if it was intentional, but the structure of your piece was very soothing to the eyes..no long, clunky paragraphs.
So..who is he? :) keep up the good writing!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

8 Years Ago

Indeed. Thank you for your thoughtful review.
Lovely. :) Well done Jyoti. I wonder if you could put in a few clues to enlighten the reader as to who you are writing about and bring even more life to the poem. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

8 Years Ago

Sure Andrea, I will put something about the person I have written.
Thank you for your kind re.. read more
I really like this one!
Keep it up!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

8 Years Ago

Thank you!
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When the heart is full of love, it pours out in verses. Your sincere words are lovely! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much.

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