Creeping murk

Creeping murk

A Poem by Jyoti_Ablaze






So many screams muffled into silences

Silences that echoed through the walls

Walls that wept blood, night and day

The blood clotted and turned black

As black as her sooty eyes.










© 2015 Jyoti_Ablaze



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Never had to face something like this. Valentine

Posted 2 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

2 Years Ago

It is really bad, but hundreds face this everyday. Thank you for the comment.
Deep, dark, intense. Loved it :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

2 Years Ago

Thank you.
It's not what we say but what we choose not to say is what counts. Good job! (As usual). Also is that picture Mariska hargitay from law and order Special Victims Unit? You know Olivia Benson? lol I know it is a random question.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

2 Years Ago

Thank you, Edis.
No I didn't know Olivia Benson, but now I do.
I got picture from Goog.. read more
Hello Jyoti, a sensational - eerie feeling you had
Bestowed,, very cool poem thanks for sharing.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
strong emotions deep thoughts
I loved this one
great piece of work JYOTI

Posted 2 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much Asra.
Gave me a goosebump. Profoundly dark. Loved reading it.

Thanks for sharing.

Devanshu

Posted 2 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Devanshu for your review.
Devanshu Rajput

2 Years Ago

You're welcome dear.

Devanshu
Woah, Very intense. Great poem, good job!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

2 Years Ago

Thank you, Alex.
Bravo! Intense and chilling! You have all but mastered writing in English my friend, I would take your work as being written by a native American. I am both proud and happy to see your work turning out so well and so fast, showing you are a true student of life. Standing Ovation! Clap! Clap! Clap!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Bear.
These kind words of your's, means a lot to me!
Made my day! .. read more
A terse piece of writing packed with such ferocity. Enjoyed it very much, great write!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
Nice descriptions Jyoti... very powerful and you give the reader a perfect image.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much!

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