Darkness (10-Words)

Darkness (10-Words)

A Poem by Jyoti_Ablaze
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Bleeding words..

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Sometimes the nights are dark but the days are darker.










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I read this over and over Jyoti..Life can hit a body hard and it's known that Christmas eve in those
hours between 6 and 8:30 there are the most recorded suicides. But I love the simplicity here...
which I imagine is true...

life and death is just that simple...dana

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jyoti_Ablaze

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much for your insightful words.



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So true.
Yeah, sometimes the days be loomed way much darker than the darkness of gone-night. And it all just seems to be happened when you're in love & your spirit keep bobbing in the ocean of infatuated lake of fairy dreams, for no reason. Kinda love the depth of your poetry. Short. Simple. And artistically quite interesting. Looking forward to reading your work!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

1 Year Ago

Thank you Adams for your warm review. Always welcome to browse through any of my work here.
G.. read more
Bullseye!!!! Just awesome!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

1 Year Ago

Haha! Thanks dear poetess!
PS: I cannot call u scrap!
Let me offer a tourniquet of hope!

Regards,
Al

Posted 1 Year Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

1 Year Ago

Well thank you, Al, for your kind words. Much appreciated.
Absolutely Amazing!!!
Loved it!!!
:)
you inspired this mess:

I always escape the dark, to stray in the daylight.

forgive me:)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

1 Year Ago

Wow! That was cool!
Kinda has an opposite view point but bang on!
Thank you for your k.. read more
Nights can be a time for healing. I like the way these words are so strong and provoking yet very open to interpretation. Amazing words Jyoti. :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much, Saurav. Your kind words are really appreciated.
This is downright awesome. I really admire writers like yourself who can accomplish so much depth and meaning in such few words. This piece brings forth a feeling that we all have, but just usually don't think to put into words. This was really good. Stay inspired.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much, Kristan. Your kind visit is very much appreciated! :)
Jeeeeeze. That short sentence, just made so much of an image in my head. There is countless things you could make those words mean.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

2 Years Ago

Thanks!
That was the intention.
McBear

2 Years Ago

c: You nailed it
Wowww truly amazing....and perfect imagery......

Posted 2 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

2 Years Ago

Thank you, Lily for the kind visit.
Lily Finch

2 Years Ago

Welcome :)
I think, sometimes, when pain breaks you down, then at night you can at least escape into sleep, with.hopes bout a better tomorrow.

pain can be described in short writes, such as this one
100 points from me.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much Danby dear, for your valuable insights!
Jyoti_Ablaze

2 Years Ago

Sorry Danny!
Dani The Unreviewed

2 Years Ago

you're welcome.
we are strange creatures,with our emotions,loved the write

Posted 2 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

2 Years Ago

Thank you, Wordman!

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