Her

Her

A Poem by Jyoti_Ablaze

That day she witnessed the invisible; 
Of it she spoke with her lips sealed.  
Many ignorant heard her voice; 
Just to let it fade in silence, 
 While she kept on screaming. 

 -jyoti_ablaze

© 2016 Jyoti_Ablaze


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So powerful in its simplicity. Loved the calmness of this piece. Really, you can say a lot with only 5 stanza's giving room for your reader to react differently to it.
Well done. Best read today
Aphy

Posted 7 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

7 Years Ago

Thank you Aphy! Glad you liked it.
There are many layers within this short work of big meaning.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

7 Years Ago

Sometimes words are not enough. Glad you visited.
Powerful words and places you took the reader. You create thoughts and visions of struggle hidden inside. Thank you Jyoti for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

7 Years Ago

Sometimes I try letting those voices out. Thank you for your kind review.
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

You are welcome dear Poet.
crying out in her mind,lot of emotion in this great write !

Posted 7 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

7 Years Ago

Thank you Wordman!
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An interesting piece, playing with oxymorons. Short but expressive. I enjoyed reading.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jyoti_Ablaze

7 Years Ago

Thank you Vanessa, for your kind visit.
V

7 Years Ago

You're welcome.
I love a piece that speaks deeper than intended, because people tend to have their own perspective and/or life connections. That said, this, to me, speaks also of wisdom itself...and that not everyone actually gets wiser in necessary areas of life.
Thanks for sharing!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

7 Years Ago

Profound words Sir. Thank you for the kind visit.
Antoñyo

7 Years Ago

You're welcome
Oh, Jyoti, you always flood your words with rivers of movement and emotion. This is so painfully dark and powerful. How her silences speak so profoundly.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

7 Years Ago

Thank you Craig! She always find me.
An owl on the moon

7 Years Ago

A divine muse, to be sure.
jyoti,
only other SHE can hear it with full sense............................ I envy you and those.......

carry on..

m p


Posted 7 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

7 Years Ago

Alas. Life is so unfair.
Thank you for your kind review.

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