Finding herself

Jiggling down the lane, she laughs

She laughs so hard that she cries

 

Running down the lane, she falls 

She falls so hard that she flies

 

Stumbling across it, she finds

Finds something deep, she loses

 

 Desperate for breath, she binds

She binds so tight that she frees

 

As a free spirit she rise

Rises so sure that nothing defies.

 

Author's Note

Thank you for your time!

Reviews

[Shuvadip Mallik]

I guess there is a message you put here..
What is it ??
"Everything we try can end in an unexpected result" or "At the end of all we break our bounds and become free" ....
Or something I couldn't understand at all ...??

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

You came close to it both of your speculations. Its okay to fall and rise, but what's important is to rise and not give up. Let's be childish and fear not the oblivion.
Thank you for the kind visit.

[Shuvadip Mallik]

Ah ! Now I get it,, thanks for simplifying .. :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Its a pleasure!

[Sami Khalil]

Very inspirational and uplifting. Good form and substance...:)..............

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you Sami, its encouraging.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome. ....:)))))

[Aswin R Prasad]

Loved how you structured this write. A motivational write.

Keep writing. :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you.

[S.P.GORAI]

Motivational.................

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you..!

[anne]

lovely creation...inspiring...:))

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you.

[Omikron]

This somehow triggered a random melody in my head, almost like it's a piece of a song. However, you don't need any help from instruments to make this piece moving. Really like it, and I like the melodic structure of it. Bravo.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you Omikron for the kind visit and review.

[zunie frost]

i really love the rhymes of your work ... it just kept me reading
very niece piece of work

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you Zunie!

[zunie frost]

welcome !!!

[Stan Lee]

Yet another wonderful poem Jyoti! :) Sometimes success is just one step away from failure. Keep writing, keep smiling. :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you dear Andrea! Your review has made me smile. Thank you.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

awesome..........
sometimes all you need to ascent is a fall.......
loved it!!!
:)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Indeed. Thank you.

[Meshalini]

This is so lovely and I like your flow...great piece of poetry...keep writing.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you Meshalini. Happy that you kindly visited and reviewed.

[Meshalini]

Your welcome....