Unsaid

Unsaid

A Poem by Jyoti_Ablaze


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So many things remain unsaid and they will be ;) That's the way it is. Enjoyed your poem - your rumination. :)

Posted 3 Months Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

3 Months Ago

Thank you Sourav.
Glad you enjoyed it.
very beautifully done Jyoti...
if words had life...how many we have killed without second thoughts..

so many words left unsaid..for fear of hurting others..for fear of rejection..the explanations too many..

i enjoyed reading it.


Posted 3 Months Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

3 Months Ago

Thank you Galadriel.
Glad you enjoyed it.
Amazing...!!!
To me, it was like a mixture of regret, grief, wishful thinking...was there something more? I'd really like to know.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

3 Months Ago

That was it.
Glad you liked it. Thank you
I love how you give words a life, a soul, these beings that live in you and wish to find freedom through your voice. And dear poet, I can only imagine that the words in you will always find the most heavenly home.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

5 Months Ago

Thank you Craig, for your beautiful review.
An owl on the moon

5 Months Ago

Always glad to find your inspirations, Jyoti.
The first I opened and I loved it, now that you have my attention I can read the rest. Keep up.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

5 Months Ago

Thank you Tetu. Glad you liked it. :)
Nice writing Jyoti. Sorry I only just saw your read request. I've been flat out lately. I'm glad to see you're still writing! I enjoyed this poem and how you expressed your emotions. My favorite line was "the mind knew better than the heart ever could". So very sad but true! Thanks for sharing. Stay inspired! :)

Posted 5 Months Ago


Andronicus

5 Months Ago

Can I follow you on instagram? :)
Jyoti_Ablaze

5 Months Ago

Oh yes yes please!
I go by my pen name - jyoti_ablaze
Jyoti_Ablaze

5 Months Ago

And do DM me there so that I can know its you! This is exciting!
So naturally and smoothly expressed what poets often feel. Thumbs Up ! Keep sharing.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

5 Months Ago

Thank you, Suhd.
awesome writing, such amazing flow of emotions...

Posted 6 Months Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

6 Months Ago

Thank you Apoorva!
Glad you liked it.
i wonder,do we really ever move on,maybe just accept life as it is

Posted 6 Months Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

6 Months Ago

Indeed. We just accept fate.
Thank you for your kind words!
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we move on but the question is how far..unsaid words are probably the most familiar tunes of heart sometime which we ignore intentionally..very beautiful write jyoti

Posted 6 Months Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

6 Months Ago

Thank you very much!
Glad you liked it.

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