waiting for forevers rest

well its about an abusive realtionship =[ but i got the idea from one of Eburs storys =] so thanks you :)

Holding in the pain that you have caused for many years

Why do I still love you?!? Why do I believe your lies?!?!

every time with the hit and then hug of sorrow

We just live in this circle that spins faster every time

 

Just holding in my breath waiting for the swing

Not one not two but three on the floor in pain I lay there

As the pain gets worse it will ease soon

And hopefully I will be going into forever's peace without you

Author's Note

its not good i know :(

Reviews

[deeps]

This sounds fine, don't be so hard on yourself
You are a wonderful poet. This is amazing
I can feel your emotions!

[Donovan "Grey Wolf" Go..]

na its also good