I Miss You

Missing him when he goes home

The sun doesn’t shine here in my world without you

I can’t even say that my skies are blue

But the rain

Oh it pours like tears flowing from the heavens

And my days are like nights twenty-four seven

Yet and still I yearn for the days end

To be one step closer to seeing you again

Sometimes I call you

Only to be wrapped in the warmth of your voice

Just checking to make sure I’m still your one and only choice

Wishing I could be the air that escapes your lungs…

Just to bask in your presence

Your spirit and your aura being of the utmost brilliance

I miss you

Oh how I miss you deeply, insanely, and undeniably so

And the day that I finally see your face won’t be long enough

To fill the void that our parting leaves me with…

I miss you

I miss you

I miss you

Reviews

[L]

Does he know? Strong sentiments here

[c.m.]

Love this....I feel the same sometimes...love the line about calling just to hear his voice.

[Linear]

What do you say about a poem so filled with emotion with love over flowing, beautifully written poetic expression of a gorgeous love :O)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. Flowed like music. Kind and hopeful emotion making the poem a pleasure to read. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote