On The Wind

On The Wind

A Poem by Alex P.
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Why every windy day makes me smile...

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I can hear your voice on the wind,
It breathes my name,
In a language only I can understand,
And howls at all others

I can see your eyes in the night sky,
The way they glitter when you look at me,
Fills my heart with warmth

I feel you beside me in the still night,
And hear your breath on distant tides
The gentle ebb lulls me
And I return to where I belong--

In your arms.

© 2010 Alex P.


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A beautiful poem. Using nature always strengthen a poem. I like the feel and the longing in the poem. So many strong lines in this poem made the poem a pleasure to read.
"I feel you beside me in the still night,
And hear your breath on distant tides"
A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Short and sweet, it flows very well and is amazing for imagery. I can feel myself in your arms again =)


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Alex P.
Alex P.

AB, Canada



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