Tapestry of Self

Take my hand. 

Together we shall 

take the tiniest of steps

 into the path of the everywhen.

 Yes, along the way we shall stop,

 talk, discuss, enjoy, laugh, dance and… 

inhale the moments that don't matter and 

 yet can add to the tapestry of self. We can

 feel the universe sing itself a lullaby

 in the stitchings of our hearts.

 We will embrace under 

stars long burnt out.

 We must share

 our offerings

 of bliss 

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Then when all is said and done ... we get to start again... 

Reviews

[daninstockholm]

i would follow You anywhere,,, oops,, sorry,,what was the question? xxxx

[KWP]

oh come with me a frolic .... frolic ... frolic .... destination; the everywhen X

[daninstockholm]

follows like a happy puppy,,, xxxx

[B]

I have always longed to have someone to share life with
All the crazy things i wanna do

I love the poem and the image of it all

The key to life is to live like its your last day
and if you are lucky
you get to do that with someone

[Willard Wells]

Very creative work and enjoyable to read. Two souls taking hands through the journey of life finding ......................and then it starts again. Well done.

[Donald Meikle]

Yes It's a joyful walk under all that death remembering to see the everywhen.

[Robert]

Could this be a rose? A very interesting and original structured piece, but I like that. I don't like the idea of having be tied to rules and proper structure in poetry. Your words were lovely here KWP.

[Ana B.]

A beautiful tapestry dear author :) May we all do our colourful quilts of life..

[~]

Love the kite shape of the poem K! (or is it a stingray?! sorry.. maybe I am totally off)
A tapestry of knowledge and what a lovely thing to see!!

[KWP]

could be a wine glass me thinks ... I am liking a stringray ... could be a needle and thread going up to the tapestry ... could be a space craft ... could be a leaky puddle ... hmmmm

[Ruth]

Glorious...such compassionate passion here...beautiful to absorb :)

[Valentine]

I had to smile at the first lines. Tiny steps, whew, my husband was tall and even his tiny steps had my legs working overtime. Luckily he was a cuddling slow dancer. Nice memories. Valentine

[Thatoetsile Simons Thup..]

I like it.
Love the way you used your words.
Love the figure of speech.

Keep doing the good work.
KEEP WELL.