Ultimate Solace

Ultimate Solace

A Poem by KWP

into the folds of time

(time was never there)

I sink 

reality peels away the physical

(I was never here) 


crumbling like over baked cake

life leaves me waiting to be devoured 


dissipation of life manifested 

my own breakage 

finds solace resting in eternity 



© 2017 KWP



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mmmmmmmmmmmmm i hope i face such death with the same courage and revelation ... i like the tight packed depth of this one Elizabeth! nice job!
E.

Posted 4 Days Ago


crumbling like over baked cake
life leaves me waiting to be devoured

mmmm :) oh i always love cake..and mmm to imagine as a crumbled over baked cake..

so much of stress can do that to us isnt it..over bake us..make us loose our flavour.. and then life expects someone else to eat us lol...

guess no one wants a cake thats not perfectly baked.... and then end we end up in the trash can :P

sorry i got little carried away with the cake ;)

thanks for sharing this with us :)

Posted 6 Days Ago


KWP

6 Days Ago

how can we not get carried away with cake .... mmmmmm cake!

thanks you my friend - a.. read more
Galadriel

6 Days Ago

hahah unique trajectory - i think i do that a lot with many poems.... ;)
Galadriel

6 Days Ago

if you don't mind i would like to borrow your idea of over baked cake ..and write something myself :.. read more
Is this meant as intense self-reflection, I wonder.. One foot in past, one foot in now plus absolute inertia re. moving on. Perhaps i misunderstand.. maybe you are a mere mix of what you've stirred into KWP.. sliced, crumbed, do you wonder who, what you could be or - already are..

Posted 6 Days Ago


KWP

5 Days Ago

I've just been at the gym - I did some pretty intense high intensity workout which I am happy with -.. read more
emmajoy

5 Days Ago

I want to go to the gym.. only allowed a swim at present.. but getting there.. rayy! Sleep beautifu.. read more
KWP

5 Days Ago

Vivid dreams - I always dream about people - I must have attachments or something :) I wake up the d.. read more
well i hope it was chocolate

Posted 1 Week Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KWP

1 Week Ago

it was chocolate mud of course
 wordman

1 Week Ago

lol,no mud please
Drifting casually along the downward spiral.

Great read

Matthew

Posted 1 Week Ago


I used to keep rats as pets. For about 8 or so years I did this. They really are loveable little b******s but, they don't live much longer than 2 years... ever. This made me think of all the dead rats that used to be my friends.

Posted 1 Week Ago


KWP

1 Week Ago

I used to have budgies name Ernie and Bert - Bert got out one day my sister was trying to get him an.. read more
Dead Alive Dave

1 Week Ago

Rats are a really good time, clever beasts. Just not for long. Like some people. But not the good.. read more
that might be delightful..just being devoured...crumbly cake may not look as pretty, but it tastes just as good...
i really like the entire "i was never here" concept---
we live, we die...and afterwards...where is the proof?

Posted 1 Week Ago


KWP

1 Week Ago

I'd like to be devoured - sounds kinda sexy ;)

cheers Jacob X
into the folds of time

(time was never there)

I sink

reality peels away the physical

(I was never here)


Such a deep and poignant realization put so subtly :) bravo
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Posted 1 Week Ago


KWP

1 Week Ago

oh hello you - nice to see you - it's been a while - hope all is well - thanks for your thoughts XX
Anand Sehgal

6 Days Ago

The schedule has become a lot more hectic :) thus dearth of time :) How have you been?

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