float

unmovable 

is one 

who has detached 

unstoppable 

is the person 

who attaches 

their ego 

to a purpose of good 

unbiased 

is he who 

knows nothing of division 

unrelenting 

is the warrior sage 

know thyself 

your inherent knowledge 

has the answers 

ask thyself 

for you are the original 

mustard seed 

be thyself 

for those who are full of themselves 

are truest of all

unfetter

float

be 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed this poem my dear friend.
"unfetter
float
be "
I did like the above lines. Meaningful words in three. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Love the positive sentiment in this flowing and musical, chanting free verse. Was a little confused at the line 'for those who are full of themselves' a I was always under the impression that such arogance might be the mark of a psychopoath lol!

[KWP]

I know right ... we have always been taught this as a negative thing ... but those who are full of themselves are sure of themselves, those who are sure of themselves begin tho know thyself, once we know ourselves then and only. then we have a chance of connecting with the everywhen (well, in my wee little opinion that is :) )

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Wee Little? are you of Scottish descent?

[KWP]

Gunn Clan :D

[KWP]

but my 5th great grandmother came to Australia on the second fleet as a convict

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Like lots of folk I have relatives in Australia going back to those who emigrated in the sixties. My brother and sister are in Sydney too.

[KWP]

where in Sydney are they?

[John Alexander McFadyen]

My brother is in Lane Cove and my sister in Wollstonecraft.

[KWP]

ahhhh so they live up the road from my work place ... nice area they live in. I live on the other side of the Harbour Bridge in a place called Maroubra which is close to Bondi Beach :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Oh lucky you, apart from the sharks and jerlly fish lol!
My brother and his wife are doing Ok she is a banker and he has a high flying tech job

[KWP]

when I was in Uruguay the jelly fish were in their thousands and they were as big as a football - undeterred we swam - it was magical ,,,,

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Sooner you than me. I am a good swimmer but hate the idea od jelly fish etc! How did you swim without getting stung? I guess it depends on the type of jelly fish?

[Roger Turgeon]

Know ask be...just 3 simple steps we don't often take or continue to take

[Einstein Noodle]

dichotomy abounds .... makes me think of the "take two points seperate from one another and begin to divide the distance in half ... foooooooooooorrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeveerrrrrrrrrrrrrr! ;}
i am taking your closing V with me today .... ok!?
E.

[KWP]

Hey EEEEEEEE - love you - hope all is well. Dodger enjoyed some big waves at the beach yesterday due to the cyclone up north .. me, I be fine X

[Einstein Noodle]

good ol' Digger ... Beau rests his chin on the table top and leans down to do it ..Bella is still kicking up her heels ... Bella and I are both 70 this year ;) don't you just love the effects of the larger storms when they are far enough away "up north" so as not to damage ... what electric air it is ...everything stands up on end ;) hugs kiddo ... and peace and joy ... i see you :-)
E.

[wordman]

reads almost as tao wisdom

[jacob erin-cilberto]

such an interesting write..almost sarcastically bashing ego while at the same time embracing it because we do have to believe in ourselves...have self-confidence...or how can we help or lead others...
and how else can we find contentment in our lives...
especially love the way you ended this gem.
j.