A Coming of Age Poem

A Coming of Age Poem

A Poem by Cat


I am 12 when I realize I will never be doe to hart

Just b***h to mutt

I am 15 when I decide I will always be angry pen on paper

Hoping maybe someone can make sense of my scrabble

I am 16 when I discover I cannot give what what I do not not have

I blame myself for the aftershock

I am always rubble

remnants of other people’s decisions

I am always

Static sarcastic simile

Always a fragment of someone's fantasy

Always archaic acapella

Voices strained drained into silence

And they tell me

There have never been galaxies from gravel

Never a promise not plagiarized

Never wealth from whirlwind

Don’t bother looking for something that is not yours for the taking

I am 16 and I wonder when I’ll be able to sleep without desperate hands clutching to bed sheets begging answers to the things I do not understand

There’s not a lot of things I do

© 2017 Cat


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"I am always rubble
remnants of other people’s decisions"

Aren't we all? This line shows how deeply others affect us on an emotional level.. The last lines carry an almost hopeless emotion, as if the person has already given up...
Well penned.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cat

7 Years Ago

Thanks! :) I'm glad you found that part to be touching
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Years Ago

You're welcome, C! Always a pleasure reading good works 😊



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these lines are so nice that i could relate to this well....keep going girl!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cat

6 Years Ago

haha thanks so much again!!!
Life is a steady teacher. With aging. We lose our innocent. Which is very sad. Thank you Cat for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cat

6 Years Ago

Thanks Coyote :)
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

You are welcome Cat.
Wow! This is great! It takes you by the throat and shakes. Some beautiful turns of phrase, too. I particularly love the alliterative "Always archaic acapella". I just loved it. I hope you don't still feel this way, though!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cat

6 Years Ago

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it :) Some days I try not to haha
"I am always rubble
remnants of other people’s decisions"

Aren't we all? This line shows how deeply others affect us on an emotional level.. The last lines carry an almost hopeless emotion, as if the person has already given up...
Well penned.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cat

7 Years Ago

Thanks! :) I'm glad you found that part to be touching
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Years Ago

You're welcome, C! Always a pleasure reading good works 😊
I always enjoy a good age-based poem. I think it's beautifully written; great job! ;3

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice poem very nice poem

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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I'm a little bit of a wanderer but who isn't in this world? Aspiring polyglot and amateur poet. Words are my best friend and so is poetry. Come get lost with me it'll be fun I promise :) more..

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