Where Thoughts End and Dreams Begin

Where Thoughts End and Dreams Begin

A Poem by Kailani

Eyes shut
Breath steady as the white noise inside my head
Fingers cold
Grasping tightly at the side of my bed
Worries snatched by imagination's surreal embrace
Foggy apathetic comfort and a falling rush through space
Unconscious creatures pull me in
To where thoughts end and dreams begin.

© 2017 Kailani



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I can see the imagery so vividly, great piece. I especially enjoyed the final two lines.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Kailani

1 Month Ago

Thank you! :)
Great shot at allegory! Daring experimental! Unzipping of depths.
neurostar

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

In the journey into dreams. We do have some control. You create realistic place and the need to set-up the dreams. Thank you Kailani for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautiful last line Kai. loved it

Posted 2 Months Ago


Kailani

2 Months Ago

Thank you! Glad you liked it.

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Added on September 7, 2017
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Tags: Abstract, Sleep, Dreams

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I'm a teen who loves to read and write multiple genres. Everything is a work in progress, so please let me know if anything just completely sucks or could be improved on in any way. All feedback is ap.. more..

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