End this nightmare

End this nightmare

A Poem by Kaitlyn
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just wrote it. Hope you like :)

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You left me with a kiss

You said "you'll have to deal with this",

I couldn't believe it,

I just can't deal.

Why would kiss me

Then walk away

Leave to go back to her.

It's just not right,

How did it happen?

Why does this feel so wrong

But then again it feels so right.

How can I still want you?

Why would you still care?

Can't I just get away?

End this nightmare....

 

© 2010 Kaitlyn


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Hmm.... I think one should take matters of the heart very slowly, so as not to get hurt.
Seems people think that love has something to do with the physical person, and I don't really think it does.
It is always good, however, to write poetry about how we feel.
Carry on, then!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I think the nightmare can end if the main character decides to move on with life finding new love with a more honest man. However our hearts are all feeling and no brains to process information so we find ourself trapped in a nightmare with no way out.

Posted 13 Years Ago


really good :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


i like it.. keep up the good work :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


very nice, i liked it

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great flow with this poem, and good rhyme, I liked it very much

Posted 13 Years Ago


nice job. This one hit home with me, and you did a very good job describing the emotion one feels during this type of situation.

Posted 13 Years Ago


i think you ment to say "why would you kiss me then walk away"
That guy is a Koon, if he did that to any of my friends i would track him down.
I love the emotion in the poem though, nice job

Posted 13 Years Ago


WEll done. I like how this sounds since its so common among people who are dating I like how you express your feelings so well.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on December 20, 2010
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Hi! My name is Kaitlyn, I'm 16 years old. I can be really interesting at times. (Haha). I love having fun and writing. Writing & Music are my life! I don't usually talk about things, I just write abo.. more..

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