Darkness

Darkness

A Poem by Kaitlyn

When does this dark tunnel turn into the bright sun light?

Where does this tunnel end?

How did I end up here?

Who set this curse upon me?

Why can’t I get out of here?

Is this the end?

The very last serenade?

Can’t you just turn back time…

Try to make me feel sane…

The one thing that’s keeping me here

Is the great escape that comes with taking away the pain…

The things that make me tremble with the pleasure

For releasing all the things hidden inside...

Can’t you see?

Can’t you help me?

Can’t you change this and leave this world behind?

We can take away the dark

Add a slight bit of light

Then live our lives…

© 2010 Kaitlyn


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Great imagery in this poem a really gripping reality that people can relate to good job

Posted 6 Years Ago


Good work, maybe a little sad, but its these emotions that enable us to write, without a little pain where would we be, the same is sain for loves sweet tragedy

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice poem. Very sad and depressing. I felt this way once upon a time.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Love Is Always Within. Trying To Find It And Use It Right Takes Along Time.
Its There And Will Always Be.

I Like This One. Very Dark And Meaningful Within.

Posted 13 Years Ago


cie transition, good poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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"The one thing that’s keeping me here
Is the great escape that comes with taking away the pain…
The things that make me tremble with the pleasure
For releasing all the things hidden inside..."
~~great line~~~wonderful poem~~~~!!!

:)


Posted 13 Years Ago


Very nice. Your transition between the questions and the rest of the poem is seamless. I think we often need to remember to add a little bit of light. It can certainly do wonders.

Posted 13 Years Ago


this is an amazing piece of work, you really do have a talent.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Hi! My name is Kaitlyn, I'm 16 years old. I can be really interesting at times. (Haha). I love having fun and writing. Writing & Music are my life! I don't usually talk about things, I just write abo.. more..

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