Break

Break

A Poem by Kaitlyn
"

i wrote this forever ago

"

Hearts mend in time,

But mine only breaks,

Everyday i see you

It just breaks a little more,

I hurt inside and try not to

Let it show,

Sometimes when you're not around

It just hurts a little more,

I don't know what to say,

I don't know what to do,

i just wish it was back to me and you

© 2011 Kaitlyn


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real sadness in this pain that is displayed.. its short and concise proving a good particular point.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Yes my dear, hearts do mend, but some hearts take more time than others. A beautiful rendition. BZ

Posted 13 Years Ago


I never like going backwards but for some people that works well for them. I know the feeling of a heart break and still being in love with the person and not being able to have them. Sad poem!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Hi! My name is Kaitlyn, I'm 16 years old. I can be really interesting at times. (Haha). I love having fun and writing. Writing & Music are my life! I don't usually talk about things, I just write abo.. more..

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