Nonsense Nonsense

i was mad. just read it and review..

cut me down,

dead man.

Hollow you out.

bleed out.

wish upon your shady stars.

& climb the tallest virgin.

nonsense

nonsense.

whisper demented

hauntings.

& i will forgive you.

ick. blah,

gah, mah.

il shun you if i please.

go, and learn my wicked ways.

Reviews

[Wolfwind Words]

Wow, I could see the image of one stomping angrily around a room while these words flowed out like thunder! They had a strong and good flow to them. And the word choices really gave a good effect.

It's always good to let out them negative emotions.

Aaron

[Rasputin]

Well, it definitely lives up to the title... aside from that, I honestly don't know what else to say.

[Who Cares]

Wow, talk about powerful messages. I have to say that I like it though. The first stanza says it all, I love your word choice. Theh poem is so disturbing yet it sounds so beautiful. LIKE