The Serpant & the Venom

this is for you and all the girls hearts youve broken. Heres to you.

Shall I start with caring?

Or manipulation ?

I see where your words are taking you.

They taste sour.

Like venom seeping from the 

fangs of a serpent.

Waiting for its next victim.

What will her name be ?

We walked hand in hand,

side by side.

You were mine.

Manipulation settles into my skin.

It burns with every second 

of your fangs inching closer to 

my translucent veins.

Wish upon your shady stars.

Inhale defeat;

exhale me. 

Don't be mad darling,

it was my fault remember ?

Quiet down,

Can you not hear my heart racing?

Palpitating out of my chest?

Exploding on my walls with all the paint,

all the lies, and truth stretched beyond 

my eyes can see.

Oh, no.

My desperate delicious soul.

You turned me

into your little pet.

B*****d reveal yourself to the world.

'Cause when your heart shatters,

you'll die,

like the rest of your victims. 

In a world gleaming in the 

reckless indulgent of beauty,

we scream o're the losing 

of our love.

Convulsing in such 

a disaster.

Libating the sting going

down our throats.

Pulsing through the day 

with electrifying burn running

down our faces.

Was it our fault?

Did the embitterment satisfy you?

Embaressing embrace you called upon

that day.

For all of us.

What did we all get out of it ?

Nothing.

Cipher. Pure intensity.

Defeat and Guilt.

I guess something.

Beyond our control,

the blood runs,

chasing the break,

the revealing utterance 

in my voice.

We really don't care.

Your as pointless 

as the pen and paper,

writing envisage.

Pointless as the affliction

coursing our 

pittyless minds.

You prod our memory

with the fang we love.

Our heart beats nimble 

and carelessly.

Every breath,

every hour,

has brought us one step 

closer to the chip, chisel

and the dead.

Time ticks loud in our heads,

decreasing our limits to show

our affection.

Your fangs speak for themselves.

We weaken at the howl of your

whimsy exhale.

For a thousand years we've beckoned

our losings.

Our chances to be more.

To hang ourselves less.

But instead, 

darling,

my beautiful serpent,

the devil himself,

you had something much more planned.

Dripping nicotine and cadet.

More so of the libating smell of 

the sting that sears your throat.

Venom, poison.

You have a comfort that 

the darkness brings.

Is anyone listening?

Or am I alone like you

left me,

tell me so 

my death-defying serpent.

Sketched your defiance

with blue prints.

Fangs hover over us,

you made us blind.

Your frightening.

Devious. 

But oh so delicious.

We wont stop you,.

for we have no clue.

Of what you plan 

to do.

We swore never

again will we let

death and poison be 

the end of us.

Sink your fangs into us.

Almost immediately we die,

as it stings anonymously

through our faint veins.

We are dead.

& you are onto 

your next victim.

Good luck to you. 

Reviews

[zainul]

Reviews saved your boy friend from my fang.
I felt relief when I knew that it was your imagination.
He actually didn't inject his venom on any one except he captivated you with his love a special type of venom that may be a pheromone.
However,yours write is amazing.
The serpents that pretend true love and exploit may be due to greater craziness of girls.
They seem to allow too much favor before knowing the nature of the man under guise.
Would you fix the spelling,'Serpant' in the title?

[Kala Benfield]

Thank you so much ! Thats probably one of the best reviews I have ever gotten ! It means alot thank you ! & yes , I will

[zainul]

You are always welcome,dear friend.
I am glad you liked my review.:)

[A. Amos]

I have to say, what a imaginary world you have created...mind blowing and you are God gifted talented my friend. Bravo!

[Kala Benfield]

oh my goodness thank you so much. That means a lot. God has definitely blessed me with alot of things

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome my dear

[Karl Woof Junior]

I hate u...................................

[Kala Benfield]

why do you hate me ?

[Karl Woof Junior]

I'm jelous

[Kala Benfield]

jealous of what ? lol

[Vile]

Lovely write, beautiful word choice. I'll certainly be coming back to read more of you. :D

[Kala Benfield]

Thank you honey! That would be most appreciated!

[Rees Thomas]

It sounds like you're in denial. It's kind of sexy and psychotic which is cool.A devil man hey

[MindIsAnOcean]

I can feel the emotions seething right out of this. Wonderfully. Like this a lot.

[Kala Benfield]

Thank you so so much !

[soliloquy]

This one isn't just angry...... It's calculatedly angry! I liked reading this! This guy must have been a real a*s?

[Kala Benfield]

Yeah he was. lol & its funny, what he did wasnt even that bad, i was just so angry that he did what he did. & ive been with him for 2 years, im still with him, and happy as can be. The perks of having a writer as a girlfriend haha. Like a taylor swift song, but only with poetry, haha he loves me though ((: haha

[Who Cares]

This was jaw dropping, You have such an amazing talent with words and you display them powerfully."I see where your words are taking you, They taste sour, like venom seeping from the fangs of a serpent." This stood out in my head for some reason. Intense imagery and I can most definatly relate to your message .