Loving me, loving you...

for her, being everything to me, who am nothing.

I keep on loving,
everything you say,
when you speak or look at my eyes.
I love you, my world!

I keep on loving,
everything you wear,
everything you like,
all the things surrounding you.

I love the roses on your lips and them
unimportant words of wisdom.
I see you, walking towards me,
the earth trembling beneath me.

I love thee and in this love
I find hope, reason and a way
to stay alive.

Reviews

[steppenwolf]

Simple and honest and fun to read.

[Sukriti Suki]

Has a form to it, a sense of structure. A few different forms of grammer used but somehow works.

[Mermaidstear]

Too much love I can sense. Good work.

[Dean]

Reminds me geometry back in high school . love it.