My Lovely One

My Lovely One

A Poem by Karen Kalbacher
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haiku

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Cherry Blossoms bleed

Around your stone my lovely one

Your battle is done

 

© 2008 Karen Kalbacher


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Sweet and eloquent, this beautifully captures the mood of a fallen hero. Nicely done!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow! Brilliant haiku! Great work!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is beautiful in its sadness! Wonderfully done! Great work!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great imagery. I love your last line... It was a bittersweet ending...

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I love this.....very tender and sweet, and "cherry blossoms bleed" is a fine example of great imagery.
Very nicely done!



Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 1, 2008

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Karen Kalbacher
Karen Kalbacher

Philadelphia, PA



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Karen Kalbacher grew up in Northeast Philly and has been writing stories since she she learned how to print letters and according to her mother has been telling stories since she learned how to talk. .. more..

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