Sea of Inspiration

Where writing dreams, I sail on the sea of inspiration

With solitude of mind on a quiet day

I stand before the passion play of a magic ocean

While all of life is breathing through the sonic waves
IT MUST BE TIME THAT DRAWS ON THE WINGS OF MY IMAGINATION
BECAUSE I SEE BLUE WATERS IN THE SKY

THAT SAIL IN THE SHIP TO THE HEAVENS
SOMETHING GAZES ME TO LOOK ACROSS THIS SEA OF INSPIRATION
WHERE EVERY SOLITARY MOMENT PLAYS IN THE WIND

And, then . . .THE MOON shines over every man, woman, and child, while the SUN MOTHER waits.

                           A thousand light years pass over.

 

Reviews

[dan]

Karen, This piece has a bit of a mystical feel to it, kind of ethereal. The imagery is vivid and stark, the wording proceeds with such flow it can almost be thought of as melodious. I immediately, after reading the piece, started hoping you would post more than two pieces. This piece is stunning in its scope. Very nicely done! take care...dan

[MFrano1]

This poem is so magical and wonderous... I absolutely adore it. This is the first poem of yours I read and I can't wait to read the rest!

[prajakta]

wow beautiful imagery and very well written.looking forward to read more of ur works:-)

[Michael Stevens]

Such a lovely description of imagination!

[W R Stowe]

"While all of life is breathing through the sonic waves" Ah but the waves of sea shall surely play'While bringing us our most treasured day.Just a play of words that your line inspired I wrote one titled "Imagine" if you want to check it out

[Loaa Diab]

nice poem :) , thanks for sharing

[Karen Arizona]

Thank you Loaa, I appreciate you reading my poem and commenting. Have a gr8 day.