We

We

A Poem by Karen Redburn

The priceless story of us


It isn't a true story, or is it, could be


You see I know who you are, who we are.


We work, dream, love, laugh, wonder, cry, sing, care, hate, 


We are the ones who live and die, we know that life is precious 


It is fleeting and soon no more time, then what will we do? It goes on until it ...


Stop


© 2017 Karen Redburn



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I enjoyed your thoughts and your logic in the poetry.
"We work, dream, love, laugh, wonder, cry, sing, care, hate,
We are the ones who live and die, we know that life is precious "
I believe we decide life. Good or bad? Dear Grandmother told me. Better to lead with sugar and honey. Negative words and anger lead to dead-end. Thank you Karen for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Karen Redburn

1 Week Ago

Thank you Coyote, glad you enjoyed my thinking on this one. Yes, it is interesting how angry words s.. read more
Coyote Poetry

1 Week Ago

I pray we can lead with concern, kindness and love. You are welcome.



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I enjoyed your thoughts and your logic in the poetry.
"We work, dream, love, laugh, wonder, cry, sing, care, hate,
We are the ones who live and die, we know that life is precious "
I believe we decide life. Good or bad? Dear Grandmother told me. Better to lead with sugar and honey. Negative words and anger lead to dead-end. Thank you Karen for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Karen Redburn

1 Week Ago

Thank you Coyote, glad you enjoyed my thinking on this one. Yes, it is interesting how angry words s.. read more
Coyote Poetry

1 Week Ago

I pray we can lead with concern, kindness and love. You are welcome.
Very much thought provoking. I think we make our own life stories, even treating life as precious is an individual act. It's fleeting, yes, but in the moment you are living, it seems an eternity...

Nicely reflective piece, made me think.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

clean, clear and easy! understandable, I like it!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very good observation, Karen! We are all alike in the most basic of senses.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Karen Redburn

2 Weeks Ago

We sure are Wendy, thanks for the comments, my friend!
We are all the same! Searching and reflection perhaps regrets then mortality.....stop I cant go down that path! You did it again Karen!!!!

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Karen Redburn

2 Weeks Ago

We sure are Gejodi. Thanks for the kind comment.
VERY GOOD LINES AND UNDERSTANDING OF IT ALL

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Karen Redburn

2 Weeks Ago

Thanks for the comment.
Karen Redburn

2 Weeks Ago

Thanks Marilyn!
You summed it up marvelously about the story of us and the stages we go through as humanity.

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Karen Redburn

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you for the kind review. The subject is a difficult one, the simple approach, I am learning, i.. read more
Sami Khalil

2 Weeks Ago

You are welcome.

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Karen Redburn
Karen Redburn

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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