Sugarqueen

Sugarqueen lady muck, a honeytrap full of venom, she 

Sharpens her scarlet nails on my face, all red-lipped 

Sucking a cocktail of platelets and Valentines hearts from 

My dull blue arteries, 

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Is this purgatory, when you taste bitter and coppery hot

Like blood, when love goes all toxic, and sugar-coats 

Rotted bits of affection, meat gone bad, my raw and 

Bloody crimson offerings. 

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Tongue all bubblegum pink and pointed like a pitchfork, ram 

It back my throat and seal me with your syrupy string of 

Paracetamol kisses; put me to sleep in a wave of hot magenta 

Dreamy, comatose graveyard heroin

My heroine.

Reviews

[Ashira Macy]

"Sucking a cocktail of platelets and Valentines hearts from
My dull blue arteries"

Something about this line just calls to me (perhaps my cliche fixation on vampires) but it is eerily majestic.

[KatDarkness]

Wow, thank you! :) Is there any of your works you would like me to read? I really appreciate you reading mine! :D

[Ashira Macy]

Of course, they are a pleasure to read. I can't wait to see your future stuff. You've earned a fan in me for sure. =)
If you find the time then "Interview with a Woman Scorned" or "Speculation of a Raven" might be up your ally.