rain

rain

A Poem by K.
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quick little write about the weather

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slowly slipping silver

it waltzes down the pane

a pitter patter pompous march

the dances of the rain


© 2013 K.



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I like this, K. Short and simple. Good write

Posted 11 Months Ago


I like this. "Pitter patter pompous march" Very cool!

Posted 3 Years Ago


It is a hard to believe that less than twenty words could work so much magic. Great.

Posted 3 Years Ago


More of a saying then a poem, but I like it.
I could see this little saying on like some orderment in the shops, you know the ones with the cleaver little writes on them.
Very cleaver to think of a piece on something as simple as rain.
I liked it :)
Keep writing :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Interesting and cool write....thank you for sharing

Posted 3 Years Ago


Why, this little poem is topnotch stuff, thank you for this!

Posted 3 Years Ago


You're a fantastic poet. I love this.

Posted 3 Years Ago


I love the rain too. Very nice:D

Posted 3 Years Ago


good .....rain....,...........

Posted 3 Years Ago


slowly slipping silver

it waltzes down the pane

a pitter patter pompous march

the dances of the rain


A splendid one...:).....................

Posted 3 Years Ago



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